Oooooo😮🥴

I don't have words.

Just some emojis.

This doesn't surprise me. It's Jarod.

He IS dark.

He believes he knows what justice is.

He's still juvenile enough to think he has to make people pay and this makes sense in a way.

Ooh getting darker. I love it and I hate it 😂 😍

Ermagherd Jarod is so angry. I'd be scared if I was Parker 😞

I like air supply but I get it. I get that any song will make a person crazy given the situation.  Oh, yes, Luther was his name! Jarod stole his kidney. That would be malpractice if a doctor did it. No one can use organs, not even a uterus, without consent and can withdraw consent at any time.

If Jarod can do that to luther and HE DID THAT TO LUTHER he can also do this to Parker.

Well done in writing it all out. Parker is a little out of character but with the drugs and personality changes and trauma it's to be expected.

The problem with someone like Jarod is this is possible, it's plausible. Look what he did that guy he stole a kidney from . That was so wrong. This is too plausible. Jarod's a crazy dude and mostly crazy because he thinks he's justified on the series and here too.

Oh yeah and the pics that someone left in the review are just spot on accurate for this. He is soo so bad. So, it's gonna get worse. I'm ready for that. Dark Jarod is scary but he's still delicious.

Jami, Jami, Jami, this is wicked. In the extreme. It's as wicked as you said it would be when we talked last month. I know you'll continue the wickedness. Love ya.

There has to be more soon. So dark. Bring the all the way dark Jarod all the way to me.

The contents are exactly as described on the label.

Dark. Jarod is so criminal here. You imply that he just spent hours and hours raping Miss Parker under bright lights, and at some point he also completed a memory wiping process. And to the tune of Air Supply and that is brain hurting song, especially in this context. Jarod listened and lost his mind.

Then we learn that it's Jarod who has come to her "rescue." he calls Mr. Parker "Mr. Duplicity" in the Crazy episode, and I was like, "yeah, takes one to know one." Parker doesn't recognize Jarod.

This isn't far fetched or implausible. Jarod did take Luther's kidney, in a motel and he used a motel and immediately left because he couldn't legally perform that surgery in a hospital and it is a horrific crime. Just like rape is a horrific crime. If it wasn't a crime he would have wheeled Luther into a hospital, properly cared for him in a sterlized sitting, and he wouldnt' have tried to hide it. I don't care if it saved a kid's life either. There's no excuse to violate agency that way.

I hope you will continue and complete this.

I love the pace and that I'm not bogging down in a lot of detail. COVID brain has me out here hating excessive descriptive work. The basics are all I need. You covered that, told us how she pissed Jarod off, got herself abducted, where she is , described the van experience and that she can't see beyond the room, what the place looks like and explained that surgery happened. You describe enough but not too much. That's a fine line and you walk it well.  This is fast paced and ooh you really hate Air Supply don't you? Jarod made that band a joke in the Junkie episode and I guess we can assume he discovered it's not the ventilation system but a band. I can see this spiraling between them and since he does use control this way and has used his power as a weapon in the past and committed organ theft this has plausibility. I'll never not read a fic that contains rapey Jarod. That's how plausible this is. More. I love the dark.

Keep going.

Well done.

Bring the wicked Jarod! He's so much more covincing when he's being bad, committing cries, stealing kidneys, making little housewives think they will be raped by him [Gigolo Jarod].

I'm definitely interested in reading more. I think Jarod might be more wicked than Miss P. I don't usually go in for Miss Parker having a name other than Parker but I like Max. You've got my attention. Use it well.