supreme Queen Stevie nicks in da house!!! I love this story! poor Parker tho.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed




Date: 12/08/23 05:31 am
I'm actually glad Miss Parker had an abortion. I used to be antichoice/ govt. control but I was brainwashed in a cult ...religion... if that makes sense..but now I know better.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed




Date: 12/08/23 05:29 am
Oh oooh can I just say that Stella is probably my favorite original character of all time and fandoms? Like I love Olivia and Goth girl from Nemesis and love Brandt from darkness falling and Kirkland from a heroes heart but Stella rules!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed




Date: 12/08/23 05:25 am
You're in top form as always mate!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed




Date: 10/08/23 08:38 pm
It's so nice to see them making process, and having 😁☺️ sex sex sex.
I hope Parker will finally talk to Jarod. Almost feel sorry for the guy.
This is how relationships go sometimes but she seems willing to make the effort.
Brilliant characterisations as always and strong plotting and storytelling and you know I love your novellas.
more please?.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed




Date: 07/08/23 08:22 pm
omg. fuckdial!
omg Jarod said the exact words Thomas said.
Jarod said these words after presumably being killed.
Thomas said the words before he was killed.
omg!
amazing as always!
Reviewer: Melinda Signed




Date: 07/08/23 01:42 am
omg. fuckdial!
omg Jarod said the exact words Thomas said.
Jarod said these words after presumably being killed.
Thomas said the words before he was killed.
omg!
amazing as always!
Reviewer: Melinda Signed




Date: 07/08/23 01:41 am
Top notch mate! You've flawlessly and effortlessly brought them into the modern world. You gave us a spot of humor where it was necessary. Terrific!
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed




Date: 04/08/23 09:22 pm
Oomphf! Powerful. As soon as I heard Jarod say itbI knew and didn't even have to see Parker's face to know she'd be shook. and thinking of Thomas and that pain. Yes, I see and hear them when I read you.
Fuck dial. nearly spilled my tea.
You're a genius.
Reviewer: Kat Signed




Date: 04/08/23 06:38 pm
Yay I love them together especially when you write them. more!
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed




Date: 03/08/23 11:29 pm
Wow, my goodness you've been busy contributing to this series & fandom and I'm so grateful.
"Fuck dial" lol that's our Miss Parker that we know and dearly love.
Jarod's absent blank faced reaction to Miss Parker's words is the Jarod we know and dearly love.
So exquiste and succinct.
Thank you.
Reviewer: valerie_ Signed




Date: 03/08/23 10:52 pm
Oh, wow, I'm so stoked for more already. You write and write and I gobble it up instantly. I love that we don't find out that Jarod's watching Parker get dressed the whole time at first. Then he speaks. I was so dead. Squeed aloud. You're a master author. Thank you a billion Mirage.
Reviewer: Xena Signed




Date: 03/08/23 12:17 am
More more more!
I'm an addict. Give me more.
Reviewer: lisa Signed




Date: 02/08/23 11:10 pm
Ohhhh so they are having sex regularly now. Owwwih mi gerd. I'm so in love with this story, and your ability to bring the characters to life. It's just like watching them and there can be only one Jarod and one Miss Parker and that's Michael T. Weiss and Andrea Parker. Keep going please. Someone needs to have regular sex if they are fictional characters. I'm envious. Seriously though you write them beautifully just like I remember them and you keep me excited for this series! There is hope that the actors will bring us the ending we want as long as the series never dies. Keep keeping it alive. I beg you.
Reviewer: Jami Signed




Date: 02/08/23 10:24 pm
Firstly, thank you for responding to my emails. I know you must be busy and I hope you are busy writing.
I think Parker would react this way. Jarod being sorry he hurt her isn't going to instantly take away her pain. Sorry isn't the cure all people seem to think it is.
We see her struggling because she knows he sorry and that puts the onus on her to accept the apology and forgive and move on and you're probably cringing because I know, and I know that YOU know that it doesn't work that way. It's going to take time.
Jarod's struggling too I see and he's right that she is hiding from him. They both understand what is happening and both are still willing to cling to each for support. I really enjoyed this chapter and all of the previous ones. It's a solid story and you write it wonderfully. Please continue.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed




Date: 02/08/23 03:00 am
Oooh amazing job with this. Thanks so much. Please keep going. Never stop writing. Ta.
Reviewer: Monica Signed




Date: 02/08/23 12:44 am
Ooh, love it. More please?
Reviewer: Cal Signed




Date: 01/08/23 08:30 pm
Mind is blown. I love the way you opened this up and omg Jarod unknowingly repeated what Thomas said...I can't even! It's worse because Jarod already fake died,!! I feel for both of them, it's so plausible and beautiful. Thank you. Congratulations!
Reviewer: Chloe Signed




Date: 01/08/23 05:52 am
Wow. Mirage! This is amazing.
You SHOULD be writing the novels. I wish you write for a Pretender television show or movie with the original cast!
I can't say it enough!
Reviewer: twisted Signed




Date: 01/08/23 05:22 am
Please don't forget this one... or any of them. Please?
Author's Response:
I haven't forgotten, Renea. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed




Date: 16/05/23 02:59 am
Top notch writing, can't rate it anything but a ten. Congrats mate!
Author's Response:
Thank you, King of Pain.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed




Date: 05/06/22 09:30 pm
Bravo!
This is evolving brilliantly. Miss Parker seems to be experiencing an unwanted self-reckoning and also a renewed battle with her inner voice/dominant parent's voice. I think Jarod's return to her life triggered the return of all of the baggage and the past, the romeo/juliet /forbidden fruit angle of her and Jarod's relationship, and it's reasonable and plausible that she'd fear even subconciously that Jarod's presence would attact any fragments of the Triumvirate, Quintumvirate or any other org to her and her children. She must also be worried about Jarod in law enforcement even if she seems displeased by him playing doctor. I'm not a mother, but I know many of them and all mothers feel inept and like they're screwing up, so that also seems in character and plausible and it adds even more realism, and makes Miss Parker even more relatable and real. That tune playing speaks for itself. She's running. I don't think that she or Jarod would ever really get away from each other. All the running only leads them running into each other. I feel lucky to have read this and that you're willing to explore deeper. It's an ancient television series and I'm glad it's been given new life by fans. You excel in every facet of writing and story telling. As a fan I particularly love the added-for-continuity paragraphs and how you move the story forward and it goes without saying the characters. I read your stories and visualize the characters, scenes, settings. It's amazing. I look forward to the next installment. Thank you.
Ciao!
Author's Response:
Hi. I'm not going to disagree with any of your theories.
You're absolutely not wrong about Jarod's presence and choice of career and the impact all of that has on Parker. This will become more clear in the coming chapters-- if you continue to read.
Of course I'm going to refer back to what we already know about these characters and this series in my scribblings, as a fan myself, because these aren't my characters, and this isn't my series, and it's important to remember that, and to remember where the characters have already been, and it's my goofy, derpy little geeky way of saying, "Psst, hi, fam, remember when abc did xyz? So do I!" *air fist bump*
Thank you for reading and for the entirely too generous review.
Reviewer: Michael Signed





Date: 03/06/22 10:05 pm
Top notch, Mate.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jake.
Reviewer: Jake Signed




Date: 01/06/22 03:07 am
hope u will updae soon!! it's like heroine and I usually only say that about smut fiction!! I can see Jarod and Michael t in each scene and having met him 3 !!! times I know what I like and I know him!! there should be smut or sex but even if there isn't I will read this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lorraina.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed




Date: 31/05/22 08:56 pm
wow you really know the characters...and know how to keep my attention. Better not let me down now lol cos I'm hooked.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, nopiupiroie.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed




Date: 31/05/22 08:39 pm