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Title: Chapter 2

Yikes. I have sympathy for Parker here but I also don't fault Jarod for the heavier hand. His intentions were clear and they were good intentions. I didn't think you hated him. Not too much anyway. MP has wrapped herself in false security and relaxed maybe too much? With Thomas she struggled to personify both the Ice Queen image and the loving girlfriend when Thomas and her family all dined. It's easy to play one role with one group of people and wear a different mask around a whole different group but when both groups are in the same room we become torn I think. She's made this new life and can barely cope when confronted with the old one and that's plausible and even expected. It's nice to see her reveal even more vulnerability and her reaction to the affair contained comedic elements which made it all the more entertaining. You contine to blow me away. I eagerly await the next chapter. Until next time Mirage...

Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/18 07:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant. I'm not surprised that you're able to write so many high qualities stories at once. I've come to expect this level of professionalism from you and I hope you never change a thing about yourself. The writing, plot, dialouge, and descriptive work are stunning. Something particularly intriguing is that Jarod's rethinking his strategy with her, ie advising her to breathe, trying to correct his error, etc. Hehee. Excellent Mirage.

Until next time...

 

Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/18 06:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Woot. I thought Jarod was dead! You had me going. Ohhhh but Sydney and Jarod's clone are. :( Love how she embraced him thinking he was the clone but then couldn't wait to get out of his grasp when she learned it was Jarod. Oohhhh Mirage. I love you. Thank you for this new story. And ditto on winter. Winter needs to gtf on already. More please?

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 09:01 pm
Title: Chapter 1

New Mirage story yes please! You just perfectly described winter this year in the first paragraph. He's a defiant old bugger and needs to go and stay gone. Just when I think spring has sprung bloody winter is like 'not so fast' lol. OK another childhood memory. I used to jump from my moving bike too. I love this story. I love that Jarod isn't dead  and that Parker has a family. Parker's reaction was spot on. She only loves me when I'm dead. lol. Poor Jarod. Why do I feel that this sweet beginning is about to turn ugly. How ever this story goes I'm in for the ride.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 07:45 pm
Title: Chapter 1

A new story from Mirage! Now that's worth a late night visit to this site! Thanks for this! Always a pleasure to read one of your stories. Looking forward to what comes next.



Author's Response:

Thank you, twisted, for reading and reviewing. I intend to post another chapter tomorrow.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 02:06 am
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