omg! Neuroreality is trying to be a thing right now and I think Jarod would have created it decades ago. Love how you. stay true to the series while modernizing it.. such a treat to read you..
Author's Response:
That makes sense I suppose. He's a genius. If there's an entire television series and the genius part is why he was abducted, and if they have to remind us in every single episode that he's a genius, then, yeah, he absolutely should have conceived all sorts of ideas and inventions that could be twisted and used in horrific ways to traumatize and kill people. He's genius and madness (and some good ol' righteous rage).
The reviews are the real treats. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Joni Anonymous




Date: 08/04/22 07:09 pm
Top shelf writing and storytelling here. You are a treasure. This, like all your work, is like a next episode. Congratulations And thank you for sharing your talent with us .
Reviewer: Gunner Signed




Date: 08/04/22 04:46 pm
oh my shipper heart! When Jarod cries after learning that something he thought up was used to make parker distrust him and that pushed her from him,..oh sobs. they were used by the centre to hurt each other it is true. this is the episode I needed and could easily be an episode it meshes do perfectly, and it's just like watching them. awe 😘 forever. more please.
Reviewer: Jen Signed




Date: 08/04/22 05:29 am
omg more please??!!
Author's Response:
There shall be more. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous




Date: 07/02/22 12:57 am
Bravo! I wasn't expecting this to happen now, and if I'm honest wasn't expecting it to ever happen at all. I should have been. It's like Parker to want to overlook obstacles and go straight for what she wants in the moment and not care about the consequences. She did that on the series, attacking Raines and not caring that she could be killed for it, throwing out the background check on Thomas, the almost kiss with Jarod, and many other instances. Did Jarod know where she was going with her concerns and just wanted to hear her say the words or was he oblivious while she was confessing? The title of this story is Oblivion and it seems to be more about Project Oblivion and how people are also oblivious about many other things and I love that. It's reminiscent of how episode titles related to the Centre side of the show and also related to Jarod's side of the show. I'm intrigued and very curious to know how this will play out. Stunning writing. You've perfected your craft and I'm grateful that you share with us. Ciao!
Author's Response:
Hi. Mm, that's a good question. We shall soon know the answer. Thanks for the R&R.
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous




Date: 03/02/22 08:58 pm
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazzzeiinggg you write them like they are on the show and make them sooooo real and I want morrrreeeeeee!!! After your reply to my other review I gave you I believe that I am right and you have met Michael T. Weiss and are being discreet and mean. LOVE that man! Was he like Jarod and did he look like Jarod and did he act like Jarod when you saw and met him????!
MORE!
Author's Response:





Date: 01/02/22 09:41 pm
It keeps getting better and better and I keep wanting more and more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jessica.
Reviewer: jessica Anonymous




Date: 01/02/22 06:07 am
Amazing update. More please?
Author's Response:
Thank you, Leese.
Reviewer: Leese Anonymous




Date: 31/01/22 04:03 am
First rate writing. People leave each other but the love doesn't always leave too and in these circumstances this makes total sense to me. Parker didn't walk away because she didn't love Jarod. Jarod didn't stay away and respect her wishes because he didn't love Parker. Love can mean giving a person distance too. Thought-provoking work as usual and always incredibly profound.
Reviewer: Jeremy Anonymous




Date: 30/01/22 12:00 am
Did not see that coming!! Please write faster.
Author's Response:
Neither did I. Thanks, TheDarkAngel.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed




Date: 29/01/22 07:38 pm
Top notch Mate! You're an amazing story teller and author. Nice name that Willow. I read that the Bidens just adopted a cat called Willow today and I reckon it's not a coincidence cos don't most Americans read fanfic hehee? Even respected world leaders read here and are inspired to name their pets after characters here.
Author's Response:
*opens new tab* Aw, she's a sweetheart.
Thanks, Con-O.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed




Date: 28/01/22 10:20 pm
Say they will be together please.
Author's Response:
I can't. Sorry.
Thanks, Chloe.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed




Date: 26/01/22 10:58 pm
I was this many years old when I discovered you and I finished reading this in one sitting a sec ago. I love it. Please say you'll continue.
Author's Response:
Welcome to my scribblings.
Thanks, Cathy.
Reviewer: Cathy Anonymous




Date: 26/01/22 10:21 pm
You keep the figurative pages turning like no one else.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Shane.
Reviewer: Shane Anonymous




Date: 26/01/22 08:47 pm
Exquisite. This might be my all time favorite. Bless you for these amazing contributions.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Valerie.
Reviewer: Valerie Anonymous




Date: 26/01/22 05:45 am
Oh my godesses I can't even right now but I will anyway. Mirage, I love the way she told him, the way he didn't pick up on what she was saying like he also didn't realize he was shouting I love you at her. He's still dealing with so much and almost lost Sydney and Sydney's the reason he nearly killed Lyle and I think Jarod is experiencing a crisis and I love it. He's so used to knowing everything and how everything will go and being in control of everything and all of the consequences and now this has challenged everything he thought he knew. I love it. It's so plausible, too. I love how you challenge everything, too, and keep me riveted on the story. It's amazing. More, please?
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed




Date: 26/01/22 12:45 am
This is beautiful. What I love most about your stories is how much soul and heart they have in them. It's so sad when a series has no soul and what I loved most about the tv series is all of the soul and heart in the episodes and characters. It's the same feeling when I read you Mirage. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sela.
Reviewer: Sela Signed




Date: 25/01/22 10:40 pm
Top notch mate! I can't get enough.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed




Date: 25/01/22 09:33 pm
This is the best chapter so far, keeps getting better and better and I keep getting more and more addicted.
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you.
Reviewer: Jillian Signed




Date: 25/01/22 04:46 am
Exquisite, Mirage. This story is tight and still has the same tight grip that attracted me to it. I love how well this is written, how sharp the characterisations are, and all of the usual pro author attractions. More than those things I love your knack for subverting tropes and societal expectations, the way you take your pen-sword to the social norms, these psychological deep dive studies into the human mind. You show no fear when you explore mental illness and you excel in the creation and character development of your own original characters as well as the ones we already know. Parker tapped Jarod's foul toss out of the entire park by shutting down what we've seen him do on our screen too many times. He helped Kyle, Ethan, and has excused his own crimes but wants to hold Lyle to different standards. He does play favorites. She's one of his most favorites. Falling in love with her has made it possible for him to excuse so many bad things she's done. I think he's his own most favorite though, and I love Jarod, so, this is coming from me, ultra fangirl. I'd still hit that. Please continue when you can. Thank you for all you've already shared with us.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks for the rather generous review. Please lower your expectations. Lower. Lower. A little lower. Seriously, thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous




Date: 24/01/22 08:45 pm
Oh, snap at Parker telling Jarod he doesn't get to play favorites. All of that. Bravo!
Reviewer: contessa Anonymous




Date: 24/01/22 02:36 am
Holy wows. Willow is amazing 🤩 . I love how sweet she is with Jarod and wise too. Lyle is lots like my cousin during mania phases of bipolar, it was really hard to deal with him. Jarods dislike of Lyle is so on poin and I like how you cover so much so well with seemless transition. This is so addictive. Please post more soon and please please update your other stories too.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks. I think I like the character, too.
Oh, my thoughts are with your cousin. I've never been diagnosed with anything (seasonal depression is over in the corner mocking me right now "wait until November, bitch"), but it's a lot more difficult, I imagine, to experience and struggle with those sorts of illnesses.
Um, well, yeah, Jarod doesn't like Lyle, and probably never will. He will simply have to tolerate him maybe. I will post more. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed




Date: 23/01/22 09:22 pm
Squee it's happening! This is omg so professionally authored that it blows my mind. I love all of the dialog and the characters are perfect. Your originals are beautiful and fleshed out too. I need more.
Author's Response:
Ugh, it certainly is happening. Aw, thanks for reading and reviewing. A really nice review.
Reviewer: Jen Signed




Date: 23/01/22 07:41 pm
Business took me away from wifi, and it's a pleasure to be back in the land of the living and reading you again. Every letter is so well placed and I don't have to tell you how well you write. The characters are exactly the characters. I'll be quick and say I can't wait to read your next chapter. You really know how to keep the pages turning. Congrats!
Ciao!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous




Date: 23/11/21 11:59 pm