OH oh oh.

I'm standing in the bathtub with just my feet in the cold water. It's helping. but not much.

Damn, this is HOT

STILL FANNING SELF after just finishing reading Transcendance.

Now I'm

fanning myself again already in anticipation

I'm

not

going

to

survive

So I watched Iowa recently. Michael's character has the girl in chains and is being terrible and he has a a blow torch he's threatening her.

But this tho is consensual and it's nice and it's just a whip.

I love this.

So don't watch Iowa. It might be troubling to see that.

Oh here we go! I'm definitely gonna need that cold shower.

Jarod with a whip. Ohh dear goddesses!!

I'd rather see Michael t Weiss over literally any actor any day of the week in this or any role.

He is still super HOT.

So is this story. My God. Need a cold soak in ice!

Hot 🔥 🔥 🥵 🥵 🥵 🥵 🥵 oh! 🤤

This is so already so much better than that book or movie.  🥵

Jarod with a whip. I stopped breathing. This is so much better than Christian GraY. Give me Michael T. Weiss in this role every day of the week. YOU RULE!

Look at you bringing home the SMUT to the fandomly for feasttime!!  Lord God, woman. Are you available for a ghostwriting gig by the way? I also have a friend who might want you for a script for a movie trapped in pre production purgatory. You wont' mind a little fame probably. I've sent you an email if you're interested. Your talents need more of an outlet and there's good money. Let me know.

No one has ever written Jarod with a whip before or any of the more detailed aspects of BDSM or the rules. I like how you are respectful to the community. I'm in that community. And it's more consensual and safe than finding a date in a religious bible camp or something. It's all about consent and some of the newbie vanillas do think it's sex and they do think it's bad and they do think it's consenting to nonconsent, to blurring lines and shades of gray just like you explained so you nailed that. Jarod explained that well. Oh, Michael would be a beautiful DOM. Sorry. I just needed to get it out there one time. I love this story. It's so well done, researched. You must know someone in the community or be in the community??

Ooh, Mommy, write more and write it harder! Yes!!!!!

Fun fact. Did you know that Jami is the name of Michael's sister in real life? You call him Jarod's player, right? Yeah, him. The actor. I know you aren't like a super fan who knows his birthday and the ear wiggling talents and you might also not know the names of his family either, and I can't believe no one has told you about it, but yeah. It doesn't mean you should change the name. I am curious and I only remember after reading and I was like.. oh. Just a heads up. If you didn't know I thought you would want to know. So now you know if you read this review.

This is hot no matter what the characters are named. It's hotter because Jarod is played by Michael. I mean.. damn. You don't get it probably or you're so used to being around gorgeous people and pretty celebrities that gorgeous and sexy are the norm for you but for me Michael is the ultimate man. I see him in everything you write. I want him big time. He is Jarod and you write Jarod better than anyone. HOT. I'm going to need multiple cold showers.

Just... oh my god wow. Your notes at the end are hilarious. Oops. I love that you clicked the button and posted this. It's brilliant and so hot and tastefully done.

This is bloody mindblowing. I hate shades of Gray. But Jarod, actually has other levels and shades,and that's why he's working as a DOM. He can do that. He can do anything. He's a Pretender. You took that hook and took it higher and I love you for it.I can't say enough how much I love this and how hot it is. I heard this was some sort of social experiment of yours but it's amazing.