That must of been one freaking long ladder she was climbing, but I'll let you away with it cause it's such an exciting, intense story and cause I forgave the original writers for that ridiculously inaccurate diabetes episode. Keep it up, you've got us all on the edge of our seats!
Author's Response:
Hi ND! You'll let me get away with it? Well that's nice but I already have. ;-) The beauty of fiction is that we can unleash our muses on these helpless characters and get away with it. Some things are unbelievable (adult male virgin, inner sense) and some we don't like but it's fiction and it's not worth anyone getting their knickers in a twist over. :-)
That said, I try not to stray too far into the magical poppies.
No, the building is not terribly tall and yes, I realize that while it is a very exhilarating hobby, base jumping from such altitudes is a very quick way to die.
I shall reveal all in the coming chapters. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: ND Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/01/10 08:23 am
Oh-my-GOOOD!
Just loooove your stories! sssooo exciting to read and keeps me begging for more. :-)
Really enjoy this one here,'cause it's a concept I haven't read so far anywhere else...veeery intriguing. *thumbs up*
Interesting idea to make MP and nicholas siblings...hmmm,so that would make good old Syd her father..? Can't wait to get to know more about that. Am also wondering who's trying to let her look like a murderer.Maybe baby-brother Lyle? hehehe.
Oh and btw loved the little piece of Lyle's thoughts about "having her" when the cops infiltrated the Centre.
So keep on the good work!
Author's Response:
Hi IceAngel. Yes, Syd gets be MP's dad in this fic and you may be right about baby brother...don't know yet where it's going.
Thanks so much..
Reviewer: IceAngel Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/01/10 04:46 pm
just read all three chapters and i am so lookign forward to the next. You kept everyone in chaacter love that nicolas is her brother and this is all very possible love this story please dont keep us waiting too long
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon, thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09/01/10 01:27 pm
Wow, wow, wow, that was so freakin' intense and just so parker and jarod, post more
Author's Response: Thanks julia!
[Report This]Date: 09/01/10 11:03 am
Hi that was a good chapter can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: Thanks Katecats.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/10 07:01 am
Wow. what a chapter, I certainly didn't have a chute for that ending either. You leave so many threads blowing in the wind..so many unanswered questions,mysteries and mazes. Simply wonderfully done.
Very creative, giving nothing away and yet there are clues, I'm not sure exactly where they lead to.. it's like have a 1,000 piece puzzle but no idea what the pieces are to be once they are put together. great writing, suspense and myster abound.
Skillfully told, I hope you have the next chapter close to ready for posting! I will be looking for it!
Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it more than chocolate, well tonight! ;-)
Author's Response:
Hi nightowl, I don't even know how to respond to such wonderful reviews. I feel so unworthy..your reviews are better than my stories..:-) (No I'm serious!)
The next chapter is in the works. Thanks so much!
I've left you a review by the way. Please update your story...
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/10 03:07 am
You are back in full force!!! This chapter was very dark and intense and i really like it!
Author's Response: There may be more 'dark and intense' in the coming chapters, haven't got it all sorted out just yet. Thanks so much dimana!
Date: 07/01/10 02:00 pm
Way cool, J runing around with his head cut off, P in control, but Who is after her? Why?
Author's Response:
yeah, J with his head cut off...always good. The answer is coming. Next chapter.
Thanks so much janeway
Reviewer: janeway Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/09 09:45 pm
So well written and plotted. Now the title fits in perfectly. Great job writing and plotting out the chapters. You are on with this one too.
Writing seems to be a true skill for you, I hope you continue to sharpen your skill (not that I can find anything wrong with it) and as always continue to share it with people that enjoy your work.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks nightowl! You always manage to render me speechless. I will try to sharpen my skill (lack of) and yes, it needs improvement. I want to thank you again for the reviews and all of the support. Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/12/09 04:18 am
I like it ! Please finish Forces of Nature too!
Author's Response: Thank you Nicola. I will update this fic as soon as I can. Just updated Forces of Nature. Thanks for R and R!
[Report This]Date: 10/12/09 09:38 am
I like this new adventure of our favorite couple! Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Hi dimana. Thanks so much. I will try to update soon. Thanks again!
Date: 09/12/09 07:34 pm
Wow. I absolutely LOVE the plot. Love the way the tables have been turned. Parker on the run, leaving Jarod with all the questions this time. What a nice change! I'm very curious as to who is after Parker if Lyle is indeed dead (of course, no one ever really dies at the Centre). It's too early in the story for me to begin speculating but darn it if I'm not already doing just that. LOL! Love your writing style and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you TessaD. I'm glad you're liking it so far. I will update as soon as I possibly can. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 09/12/09 03:42 pm
Amazing once again!!! I loved it! I love the fact that Jarod is confused as hell, and that he reacts in such a way to Parker being called 'his girl'...
And we've seen Parker, yippee! (wasn't sure at first whether she would be half-absent in this fic)
Hope for them to meet soon (even if Parker goes away after, just for the sake of having them snarl at each other!!!) Just keep writing and makes us happy : post a new chapter soon!!!
(just to clarify for Mr X : Green is the surname given to Sydney by the NBC which first aired the show, when they made a synopsis of the TV show... (they even gave Jarod a surname at first, telling that the fisrt one he uses, Russel, was the actual one) Anyway, the name Green was never actually used in the show... And you know the rule : you either have a first name or a surname!!! (except for Catherine Parker or Edna Raines, but they're dead after all....) Voilà!
Author's Response: Hi Faith! Wow! I'm glad you love it, really wasn't sure how well this would be received. I like Jarod much better when he doesn't know what the hell is going on. Much less cocky that way. There will be more of that to come, I hope. I think they just might meet in the next chapter. Just for you. Hopefully I can make everyone happy. Thanks so much for reading and the lovely review as well as the extra dash of clarity...can never have too much of that. Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 09:12 am
After reading this last chapter, there are a thousand questions going through my mind. I am confused in a good way!
I am happy this comes in chapters otherwise I would just keep reading en loose my sleep. But please update soon because the wait is killing me.
Author's Response: Hello Eden. Hopefully, the story will all come together in upcoming chapters. I will update as soon as possible. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Reviewer: Eden Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 09:06 pm
Glad you've updated. Loving your take of the hunter/hunted turn about.
Author's Response: Hi ballpoint, thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 08/12/09 10:54 am
definitely intriguing premise, but there's one thing: Sydney was Sydney Green, not De Wilde; and Broots' first name was never told, so he's just Broots.
And why the hell did you have to have Parker raped!? Was it really that necessary?
Author's Response:
*pops in to sprinkle a little clarity dust*
Hello "X",
I didn't and it wasn't! The actual term I used was "attack" and no where in THIS story will you read that the "attack" was sexual in nature. (It was NOT) Try to refrain from jumping to conclusions and accusing me of writing something that I did NOT write. I'm not fond of accusations and some might view it as an "attack". ;-)
Moving on to your "other things".
I am well aware that some choose to give Sydney the name Green/Greene and leave Broots as simply "Broots' in their stories and that's wonderful but here's the thing: This is MY story! I will bloody well write whatever the hell I choose.
Are we clear?:-)
Thank you so much for reading and for the review. Feedback can be very helpful at times. I think it's great that the "premise" works for you.
Reviewer: Mr. X Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 06:18 pm
i like it.Parker on the run, J clueless. You should write more.
Author's Response: Thank you Janeway. I'm so glad you like it. More is in the works. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 04/12/09 09:50 am
more please
this is very interesting and I like the twist of the hunted becoming the hunter
Author's Response: Thanks anonymous, more is on the way. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/11/09 03:29 pm
Hi That was good please keep the story going.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Katescats! (nice name btw)
[Report This]Date: 28/11/09 09:01 am
Ok, now I am curious!!
Loved it and it read like a train.
Forget about editing it, it's as good as it gets. No need for changes.
Like you always say, forgive me for the typo's
Author's Response:
Thank you Eden. That's a relief. I often don't proof and sometime later, I'll find rampant typos thoughout the story, which I hate. Anyway, I'm so glad you like it and I will leave it as is.
Thanks so much for reading and the lovely review.
Reviewer: Eden Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/11/09 11:58 pm
love this...please continue, no scrap or edit. perfect. don't won't him to find her right away....love it!
Author's Response: Thanks anonymous! I will continue as long as interest is shown and ok, no edit. And for you, he won't immediately find her. (And when he does, I have no idea what will happen.) Glad you like it. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 26/11/09 05:48 am
loving your story here hope you bring up a another chapter love it
Author's Response:
Hi dragonlady.
I hope to update soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dragonlady Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/11/09 04:37 am
great start --- please write more
Author's Response: Thank you anon!
Date: 24/11/09 02:30 am
Great storyline. I can't wait for continuing storyline chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much electricq! Reviewer: electricq Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/11/09 01:30 am
WEll written. Great phrasing in the writing. it was a joy to read.
I have always thought a story were Parker leads Jaord on the kind of chase he led her on would be terffic if approached well. You are not following that path, but this plot is great. Full of mystery, What happened to Parker? Why was she injured? who is going to pay, and why are they the Nemeisis? Why/how did the Centre fall?
can't wait to read more. You do more than sketch out the details you involve your characters make them more than a cardboard charater, you humanize them with emotion and dialogue.
I am truly interested in reading more. Your creativity and imagination keeps the storyline moving and certainly my interest is drawn to every line, every word.
Please keep going - I'll be checking daily for more!
thank you for writing -keeping in the fandom and for sharing!
Author's Response:
I was speechless there for a second. Thank you nightowl, so very much. You will get the answers in the coming chapters and more is on the way.
I was afraid I didn't detail enough but your words always give me great relief and encouragement to continue. Now, when are you going to finish your masterpiece? (no pressure) *smiles*
Thanks again for reading and the incredible review.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/09 06:59 pm
