I love how she outsmarts him time and time again, poor J just can't win. I love the concept, the characters, especially love your original characters, the story, it's all so very well written. Please update soon. And please update forces of nature as well as it's amazing, dark Jarod (to an extent) is wonderful!
Author's Response:
Hi MsParker, thanks so much.
I will update this and Forces of Nature when I can.
As far dark J, I agree and I do have limits, though I was really pushing them with Forces of Nature. I see no reason for things to get that dark in this fic.
Reviewer: MsParker Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/03/10 01:12 am
Great part, i like the way you wrote the characters in your fics. They are even more interesting than they were in the show/don't get me wrong i love The Pretender/! I look foward for more!!!
Author's Response: You are my favorite person for saying that dimana. *smiles* I'm glad you like and I will update as soon as I can. Thank you!
Date: 26/03/10 08:59 am
Love it, love it. I am curious about where this goes next and if there is a possibility of romance, a little sex maybe? Please? We all know what that seething and snapping means, it means they are crazy about each other and should have sex, sex, sex. Or at least sex lol.
Author's Response: Hello Alison. Hmm, I don't know yet which direction this story will be taking me. I've resisted the idea of such an entanglement thus far. (in this fic) Let's wait and see, shall we? Thank you for reading and the suggestion.
[Report This]Date: 26/03/10 06:47 am
woohoo! Incredibe and so worth the wait. It's so refreshing to see our bad a_ _ Parker once again and Jarod so totatally Jarod. I loved her escape. Please MORE and soon.
Author's Response: Hi xcaliber, yeah, I'm going to try to keep her all bad ass in this one while J stays fairly close to who he is. IMO, he became a little less naive, less childlish, a little more angry, a slight bit darker with each season/movie as he lived in the real world and "grew up". More is coming. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 24/03/10 10:34 pm
Just reread the entire thing.....lol, you are great with the brutal seething, sneering, glaring, patroninizing bit and that is THE miss parker I have come to love so much!!!! Also, it's great to see that Jarod has hardened and toughened over the years which seems right in line with the show actually. Another fanstabulously Mirage original !! I love your stories, your writing style which breathes life right into each character, and all of your twists. Amazing. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks jade. Ah well I do love to see Parker and J clash. RL is giving me hell atm but I will update soon as I can.
[Report This]Date: 20/03/10 02:27 am
Intense, so what's next?!? There's gotta be a sequel or update to this!
Author's Response: Hi electriq. An update currently in the works. I haven't abandoned a fic yet and I won't. RL is doing its best to interfere- and succeeding, unfortunately. Hopefully in a few days, I will post an update.
[Report This]Date: 17/03/10 05:26 am
brvo great job on explaining everything and wow, such a fasctinating mystery suspence murder novel you got here coomene and update this soon. love this and that the tables have been truned. merci!
Author's Response: Hi kelli, I'm so glad you like the story and I will update as soon as I can. Merci beaucoup!
[Report This]Date: 15/03/10 01:10 am
oh wow, this is great mirage. You have to got to update this soon! type type, hurry lol.
Author's Response: Hi tpfan. I am typing as fast I can. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 12/03/10 09:10 am
Wow, I have read the whole thing 3 times over this is my favourite fic in a long, looong time. You can stray into the magical poppies, I'll 'let' you away with it...... =o)
Author's Response: Wow ND! Three times? I'm glad you like. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :-)
[Report This]Date: 05/03/10 09:40 am
Great part like always,so well written!
Author's Response: Thanks so much dimana!
Date: 02/03/10 09:07 pm
Fascinating fifth chapter, love your titles, love the dialogue, plot and the twists that you've already so skillfully woven. I'm looking forward to the next chapter already to what could very well be the third movie we've been waiting for. Please update this amazing fic soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Oh no, it's not THAT good but I am so glad you like it. I will update as soon as I can. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 03:03 am
Great new chapter, well written and again your insights into characters and behaviors are spot on. it's great to read something with just enought twist of being different that it captivates you.
Can't see anything I didn't enjoy... except you can't seem to write enough for me! ;-)
Thank you for sharing, for your creativity and for posting without too much time between chapters .. I still read from the beginning to make sure I'm right with you on the new addition.
Author's Response: Hi nightowl. I thought the chapters were all too long so I've been trying to sort of summarize each bit, adds to the migraine. ;-) I'm still looking forward to an update from you when you have time but I know that RL can be a pill. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated. Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/02/10 10:41 pm
OMG - you had better write more...and soon! I am addicted to this story!
Author's Response: Thank you RosieLB. I'm working on it.
Date: 25/02/10 06:00 am
What an absolutely engaging story...it pulls you in...Love the twists and turns & that Parker is a Strong, Foxy character...Well Done!!!
Author's Response: Hello michelle. Wow, thanks so much, I'm glad you like and I hope to keep Parker strong and foxy! Thanks again! Reviewer: michelle Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/02/10 03:21 am
Great story, please update!
Author's Response: Thanks Anna. I will be updating soon. Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/02/10 07:19 pm
Interesting chapter but i'm curious about your next twist!!!
Author's Response: Hello dimana. I'm working on that. (crosses fingers) ;-)
Date: 06/02/10 01:17 pm
Great story so far! I love how strong Parker is on this one, she's still kick-a**! And I'm liking the dark side of Jarod, dark but still vulnerable. I repeat everyone's sentiments, please continue!
Author's Response:
Hi xibadgurl ! Nice name! I will try to keep Parker just as she is. Tough.
I'm so glad you're liking this. Thanks!
Reviewer: xibadgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/02/10 09:15 am
i love this story so far! it's always so interesting to see their roles reversed. but only ur story has that gritty feel to it that other stories lack. u have to update it asap!
Author's Response: Hi Judy. I will update in the coming days, I hope. RL is a pill atm. Thanks so much.
Date: 04/02/10 01:35 am
Twisted but nice! ;) Love it and can't wait for another chapter which I *am* sure is being written right now? Yes??? (You had better say yes, and that you're working as fast as your little fingers can type!)
Author's Response: Hi RaChell, glad you like it, the chapter is coming along. RL is such a pain! Yes ma'am, typing as fast as little fingers will move. ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 01/02/10 04:35 am
I am really enjoying this! A fresh new concept, and great writing! (I too am cursed with the typos so they don't phase me...)
Well done, and cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much KatieQ. I'm still working on those typos. :-) Reviewer: KatieQ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/01/10 04:00 pm
uuuhhh...so exciting! really enjoyed this chapter. Finally he captures her,but doesn't hand her over to the authorities,or puts her into jail.Am really looking forward to find out what happened in D.C and who attacked her. How they found out that Syd is her father is another one that caught my curiosity. And the renewal-wing thing...oh just loving this! and who might be the leak,and why? this ready itself like a thriller.Just oh-so-great!
Keep on the beautiful work!!!
Can't wait for the sequel. :-)
-IceAngel
Author's Response: Hello IceAngel. The next update will explain the DC attack (at least some of it) and I will eventually be addressing the Sydney-Parker connection as well as some info about the Centre/renewal wing. The leak will be discovered a little bit later though. I'm still sorting it out and will update in a day or so. Thanks so much.
[Report This]Date: 30/01/10 10:54 pm
terrific writing of course. I enjoy the fact that you are able to move through the story without giving away the direction it will go in next.
Nice dialogue and of course the plot is terrific. Lots of twists ant unexpected but fun turns.
Please keep writing. I love that I have this to look forward to besides your other story! Very skillfully done.
Thanks for continuing and posting.
Author's Response: Oh wow, it's always a pleasure to read these reviews and I'm always speechless afterwards. I will definitely keep writing. Thank you so much nightowl. Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/01/10 09:38 pm
This story is bloody brilliant! Want more!!!!! I love every moment of it, and the way each character has evolved without being out of character! This could definitely be the third movie we're all still waiting for! My congratulations!!!!
Author's Response: Hi Faith! You will definitely get more- with a review like that, I simply have to continue. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30/01/10 12:22 pm
Amazing new chapter and it's turning into quite an intriguing mystery-suspense with this forth chap which is as exciting as an episode of TP, more so. As an LPN, I appreciated the medical aspect which I found to be spot on accurate, Jarod is great as a doctor and I'm so glad to see the characters are just as I remember. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Hi Miss Ice Queen. I'm shooting for a much nicer Jarod with this fic. (hard to tell, I know) I'm happy it worked for you! Thanks so much for the r & r, I hope to update today or tomorrow.
Reviewer: Miss Ice Queen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/01/10 06:40 am
I just got back from a 2 week stint in very rural Australia, so this was a GREAT welcome back present! Another chapter of Forces of Nature would make my day even more...(hint hint!) :D
I love the originality of this story. Nice twist with Nicholas' relationship to MP. And base jumping?? That girl just knows everything! Excellent flow and pace. Very excited to see what's next!
Author's Response:
Oh, well welcome back. I'm glad you like the story Fe, hope to update soon. Thanks so much.
Reviewer: fe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/01/10 01:21 pm
