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Title: The Hands of Time

No flaws. I liked it all.

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Date: 13/08/25 11:19 pm
Title: Would I Lie To You

I love how well Jem knows and understands that Parker didn't like Jarod's manipulations and that Parker doesn't like him reading her thoughts and being... all Jarody about it. Well done.

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Date: 13/08/25 11:16 pm
Title: Learn to Fly

OH, so sweet.

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Date: 13/08/25 11:10 pm
Title: Chapter 10 If Loving was enough

Jem is precious. I'm defo not disappointed.

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Date: 13/08/25 11:08 pm
Title: Miracles Happen

I love this song choice at the beginning. Re you end notes, thanking the letters... and now PBS is getting defunded and closing down. No more Sesame Street. The fascist trump regime hates education and helping children. The little things ..

This chapter is beatiful.

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Date: 13/08/25 11:07 pm
Title: Chapter 8

No, you didn't lose my interest. I will keep reading to the end.

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Date: 13/08/25 11:04 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Oh, no, lord, she's worried about hairy legs. It's such a natural thing. I wish she wouldn't worry about that. It's cute though and cute to make Jarod flustered.

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Date: 13/08/25 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I have to familiarise myself with Dan Folgerberg. Well done. I love this chapter.

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Date: 13/08/25 10:53 pm
Title: Iracus Ascending

Ooh, HIS sleeping beauty. You haven't lost me at all.

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Date: 13/08/25 10:52 pm
Title: Iracus Ascending

Ooh, HIS sleeping beauty. You haven't lost me at all.

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Date: 13/08/25 10:52 pm
Title: Chapter 4 Name

They're getting closer and closer. So nice.

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Date: 13/08/25 10:50 pm
Title: Chapter 3

ooohh noice.

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Date: 13/08/25 10:48 pm
Title: Survival

Parker would worry about fashion while recovering... lol. Nailed it.

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Date: 13/08/25 10:45 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Ok, I'm  hooked.

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Date: 13/08/25 10:43 pm
Title: The Hands of Time

Shame this isn't complete but I love it.

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Date: 25/02/18 01:46 am
Title: Would I Lie To You

Mabye CVS and SLM should have written it like this. I like this more!!! The best authors have no control of their writing from what I've learned from being around this fandom..

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Date: 25/02/18 01:39 am
Title: Learn to Fly

Still on the ship and enjoing the smooth sailing thanks. :)

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Date: 25/02/18 01:24 am
Title: Chapter 10 If Loving was enough

This Colonel seems maybe untrustworthy but I hope not. Nope I'm not disapointed.

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Date: 25/02/18 01:18 am
Title: Miracles Happen

Wow Jem is their child... the thought never entered my mind because I always thought he was a clone but this...if Miss Parker can look just like her mother then yes it's ok for Jem to look just like his dad Jarod. :)

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Date: 25/02/18 01:13 am
Title: Chapter 8

The throne lol. I know I would make alott of typos if I tried to write. The story is good. Jarod grabbing her.. .that had to hurt. I'm in bed reading on a saturday and enjoying myself more than when I go out. ;)

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Date: 25/02/18 01:07 am
Title: Chapter 7

I'm still entertained. :)

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Date: 25/02/18 12:58 am
Title: Chapter 6

I listen to Dan Folgerberg all the time. Love him. It's so sweet all the little notes at the top with the lyrics. Rabbit Island. Yes. Teh bunny. lol you are not a typo queen. I'm enjoying this alott. "Do real women need to jump in front of bullets?" Whoa. Tense.

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Date: 25/02/18 12:25 am
Title: Iracus Ascending

Made of granite... it did seem like that. Great job with this. You haven't lost me for sure.

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Date: 25/02/18 12:18 am
Title: Chapter 4 Name

Yep. I always thought they were both pretenders too. Miss Parker is just as much of a pretender as Jarod. Great minds thinking alike. Well done.

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Date: 25/02/18 12:11 am
Title: Chapter 3

Rats. I just noticed this wasn't completed. I'm going to read it anyway since I'm hooked and all.

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Date: 24/02/18 11:58 pm
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