They are getting on so well. I like the castle in the moat comment. Good storytellng too.

Loved this when you writing it, always hoped you would finish the story.

Have a great Christmas!

That waa a remarkable move (the drug) and Parker, of course, played it so cool, as did Syd. But poor Jarod and Gem, left behind and concerned. It's a remarkable story, a lovely tale and you extremely well written.

You can't leave it like this- well, you can, but I'd really rather you didn't, haha.

I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter, nightowl, when ever you're ready.

I love the Beatles lyrics you included- very fitting choice, nightowl. Very lovely scenes between Parker and Gemini and while you didn't go into details of the wedding ceremony, the imagery was lovely enough, the descriptions were so well done that the imagination could fill in the rest.

Haha, typo queen?  No, you are not.

You've struck a perfect balance with dialogue, details, descriptions, romance, adventure, family life and that little boy- oh, nightowl, that was so sweet, so sad that he feared he'd be rejected. And I thought Parker's reaction was fantastic, quite reminiscent of little Miss Parker.

Also, I love that you spent some time on the personal conflicts brewing within these characters and their personal struggles and attempts to come to terms with all that's transpired and speaking of the characters, they're all spot on.

And I'm sure that Miss Parker would be pleased that she pronounces Brigitte "Bridgette", haha. Very nice touch there.

You haven't let us down and I'm quite certain that you never will. *winks*

You are not the typo queen, but you are the "damn, that was hot!" queen! Who knew that something as mundane and ordinary as leg bristle/shaving could be so amazingly sexy?

It was very cute the way she was only toying with him and then it suddenly became something bigger than the both of them and left Jarod aroused and fumbling- so funny, nightowl. You write them so well.

Oh, nightowl, wow, have I mentioned the inclusion of these lyrics? Great, great job and very fitting. I'm only familiar with one DF (RIP) tune: "Lonely in Love" (awesome sax). I'm youtubing Iracus now (nice).

This was another excellent chapter. Jarod's explanations and the reservations he has were all perfectly done and I could just imagine the major's reactions. Also, Jarod's admission/acknowledgement/acceptance of his role in his and Parker's relationship (or lack thereof) is quite refreshing.

I'm pleased that he could step back and see the err of his ways, despite what his best intentions might have been for her.

In the show, he always seemed, well, not only unapologetic about his "slaps in her face" but also oblivious and even uncaring and just plain mean at times, as if he was tormenting/manipulating her and enjoying it. Bad, Jarod.

Oh, so sad. Poor Miss Parker. "You don't have what I need for pain." But Jarod's words were great. "You're not expendable"- oh, nightowl, you make him so-- so like-able. Why do you do that? haha.

I love how well they communicate and compromise even if she is still moody and snippy. And it's great to see her well taken care for a change.

This is how that episode should have played out (Instead of him leaving her there to the vultures). This is what really happened and in my mind, will always be what happened. You got it right, and the writers- well, they had it all wrong.

There are many story lines/episodes that in my opinion would benefit from redaction but Donoterase stands out among them all (well that and The Inner Sense and definitely IOTH - I know you're working on those too, right? *smiles* And the ending to the show as well?)

I love the power struggle, albeit brief, between Jarod and old man Parker, that was well played, nightowl, and so Jarodesque "if you love her..." - but of course you nailed Jarod, you nailed them all! The flight, Jarod's thoughts, all of it, splendid.

I love the the story it is great.  You write a thrilling story I coudn't stop reading. I Can't wait to read the next part.

 Dear Miss Typo Queen,

games are afoot and i am dying to see it all unfold. More, please!

Sincerely,

Mary

So, as promised, I'm here to beg for an update. I just read the entire story (again) and it is begging for continuation. The plot is amazing and to be honest, it should have gone down exacly this way instead of J leaving her to die. *bad genius, bad!*

Your characterizations were spot on perfect, the dialogue was brilliant, it's amazingly well written. What typos? There are none. So please...What happens next? Does the Centre find out and interfere? Will Jarod just wait patiently for her? Will Jem and the gang try to break her out or take down the Centre? 

I know you can do it!

Well, what can I say, a friend told me about this story and it lived up to their opinion.  But I was so totally disappointed when it ended as it did. I looked at the date and realized it has been a while since you added. I hope you will be finishing it. It screams for an ending. I scream for an ending!

Please!