What? What happens next?
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 06:31 am
The writing is still great but damn, that's horrible, even if Jarod is annoying. I almost feel sorry for him.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 06:30 am
Broots finally decides to get the hell out of dodge. Good for him.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 06:27 am
"The rain man would be a genius compared...." very interesting direction you've taken here.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 06:24 am
And the plot continues to thicken. Great job.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 06:21 am
Love the typical sibling interaction. Nice.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 06:20 am
Poor Jarod. (not) haha
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 06:19 am
Hmm, that sleazy, gorgeous Lyle...what has he done now?
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 06:17 am
Haha, such a kind offer from the Ice Queen. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 06:15 am
Love your story and writing style! PLEASE continue it!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/05/09 09:22 am
It's great!! Please continue to write, I want to know what would happen next!!
Reviewer: Georgia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/06 07:11 am
I like your story. Please continue it. Would like to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/09/06 04:26 pm