Ahhh! When a baddie kills another baddie. Awesome. This was all so totally awesome.
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Date: 14/08/25 01:09 am
Yes, yes, it HAS to. Oh, this is amazing.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:54 am
Oh, I can feel the desperation. Need more. You are amazing.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:50 am
Oh Lyle. Do we trust him or do we think he's evil business as usual....hmm so many thoughts but I'm too eager to read the rest to voice them. I love your writing.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:48 am
Oh, EThan said the wrong thing to Jarod. I can see that scene, feel that tension. Awesome.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:46 am
Ooh, so stoked for more.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:44 am
Ooh, so super excited to see how this will all play out.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:35 am
Ugh Paul is so disgusting. I want him to die. Your writing is awesom.e
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Date: 14/08/25 12:27 am
Oh, no, I do hope Ethan is wrong. SO much suspense.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:25 am
Oh so creeeepy. I love it thou.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:11 am
Indeed, but I want to know what happens next. Clicking on to the next bit now.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:06 am
Oh, yeah, I so agree with Parker that she sends Paul right on off to the hell he came from. Yes.
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Date: 14/08/25 12:02 am
Yeppie anything is possible but maybe Paul is just sick. This is so amazing. You write so dang well.
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Date: 13/08/25 11:58 pm
Paul needs to be put down. I understand him getting back at the person who hurt him, but not hurting other people because of it. WEll done. Your wirting is amzing.
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Date: 13/08/25 11:54 pm
Ah man, I'm glued to this one. Your writing is amazing.
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Date: 13/08/25 11:47 pm
Ah man, I'm glued to this one. Your writing is amazing.
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Date: 13/08/25 11:47 pm
Oooh. Paul needs to be put down. You really evoke emotions that make me have thoughts and say that another human should be put down but Paul isn't human. He's rabid and needs to be put down. Well done.
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Date: 13/08/25 11:42 pm
I hope Parker is wrong. If she dies I will be so angry. Excellent writing by the way. Seriously. I love your style.
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Date: 13/08/25 11:36 pm
I love the interactions, all of them, between Jarod and Ethan, and Sydney and Broots. You nailed it. Nailed it all the way.
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Date: 13/08/25 11:32 pm
Ooh, Paul is a nutterbutter. You really get inside of that space though and paint us a picture and Paul is obviously battling demons and LOSING. It's awesome wirting.
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Date: 13/08/25 11:29 pm
Oh, a new story to settle down and read. It has my attention already.
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Date: 13/08/25 11:26 pm
Awesome. I love it all. It's so creepy and spooky.
Reviewer: Xena Signed




Date: 13/08/25 06:33 am
Cheering for Parker always.
Reviewer: Xena Signed [Report This]Date: 13/08/25 06:32 am
She's not gonna die. You can't let that happen.
Reviewer: Xena Signed [Report This]Date: 13/08/25 06:31 am
Lyle is ... hot in this. He's so hot and so .. hot.
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Date: 13/08/25 06:31 am