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Title: Part 20

Nice. Spooky as hell but nice.

 Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 01:24 am
Title: Part 19

It seems you were having some doubts up in your disclaimer but it's all working well if you ask me.  I agree with Miss Parker that ' it has to."

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Date: 24/08/18 12:48 am
Title: Part 18

Oh yes. She can't, she won't and she isn't obligated to. It's not her problem. I love that.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:43 am
Title: Part 17

Broots' reaction is priceless.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:41 am
Title: Part 16

Nice touch with the added tension between siblings.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:39 am
Title: Part 15

Soo plausible and so well written.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:33 am
Title: Part 14

There's a shocker with Lyle being involved. Didn't see that coming. Love the twist.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:29 am
Title: Part 13

Gross. 'you have me' Noes. Oh noes.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:24 am
Title: Part 12

I don't like that Jarod laughed at the last line but I get it. Still damn Jarod. lol. I hate that Miss P is dying.. Ahhh. This fic is gutting.

 Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:21 am
Title: Part 12

I don't like that Jarod laughed at the last line but I get it. Still damn Jarod. lol. I hate that Miss P is dying.. Ahhh. This fic is gutting.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:21 am
Title: Part 11

Yep he really is a sick f*ck but this story is so excellent.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:17 am
Title: Part 10

lol at your disclaimer at the top. The fandom is just about gone and it's only fan fic that's really kept the interest at all...the freshness and the women specifically and new perspectives I seem to like most these days but with the original story line. Shame you are lost out there and not on the radar. You write well.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:14 am
Title: Part 9

Madonna is good. Always. Still. I love your writing. This fic is really freaking wonderful. I don't read much ff, rarely do I get pulled in like this.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:09 am
Title: Part 9

Madonna is good. Always. Still. I love your writing. This fic is really freaking wonderful. I don't read much ff, rarely do I get pulled in like this.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:09 am
Title: Part 8

You haven't depressed me if it helps. This is well written and just very disturbing. Good stuff here.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:05 am
Title: Part 8

You haven't depressed me if it helps. This is well written and just very disturbing. Good stuff here.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:05 am
Title: Part 7

Painful to read at times but this is the reality for too many people.

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Date: 23/08/18 11:59 pm
Title: Part 6

Umm... ok. That is so disturbing. But well written so dude I'm here for the long haul. Well done mate!

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Date: 23/08/18 11:52 pm
Title: Part 5

That man is so freaking disturbed. Creepy creepy creepy af.

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Date: 23/08/18 11:48 pm
Title: Part 4

Gasping over here for breath. He can't kill her. You did a good job building suspense.

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Date: 23/08/18 11:45 pm
Title: Part 3

So nice and well written. You do a good job with characters too.

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Date: 23/08/18 11:37 pm
Title: Part 2

Oh wow. I can't even...

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Date: 23/08/18 11:31 pm
Title: Part 1

I asked Mirage for a recommendation and she sent me here. I'm so totally stoked that she did. You have pulled me right in.

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Date: 23/08/18 11:24 pm
Title: Part 20

It was a very interessting story but you could have added an epiloge at least . Cause now we have another never ending story just like the shpw and it's tiring not to know ,you know .Oh well . Thanks again for sharing .

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Date: 17/06/16 10:05 am
Title: Part 20

Verry good. I'm so glad Miss Parker is ok. Beautiful job!

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Date: 21/04/16 01:54 am
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