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Title: Part 5

I kind of feel sorry for Paul. It's not his fault that he has mental problems but...I hate that Miss Parker is being held prisoner and at his whims. He seems so dangerous.

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Date: 11/09/18 03:19 am
Title: Part 4

Broots is an idiot. Miss Parker's idiot.

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Date: 11/09/18 03:16 am
Title: Part 3

Ethan Ethan please do something!

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Date: 11/09/18 03:13 am
Title: Part 2

I'm glad your muse didn't desert you. This is so good.

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Date: 11/09/18 03:11 am
Title: Part 1

I asked around for recommendations and I'm so glad I did! I can feel the draining away of life a gruesome longing for freedom.

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Date: 11/09/18 03:06 am
Title: Part 20

Muhahahmwah. Wonderfully evil. It's been a blast. Thanks!

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Date: 27/08/18 08:37 pm
Title: Part 19

Maybe she won't go out fighting but will fight and win. Oh please...!!

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Date: 27/08/18 08:33 pm
Title: Part 18

I seriously hope she doesn't die. I should have read the last chapter first. I hate when she dies.

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Date: 27/08/18 08:29 pm
Title: Part 17

Poor Broots lol his reactions are so dead on.

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Date: 27/08/18 08:26 pm
Title: Part 16

I can feel Ethan's panic and frustration.. Poor guy.

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Date: 27/08/18 08:23 pm
Title: Part 15

I hope Paul doesn't die and leave Parker forever locked away... that's scary to think about.

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Date: 27/08/18 08:17 pm
Title: Part 14

Lol. Lyle scaring Broots. What fun is this going to be loll Love it.

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Date: 27/08/18 08:14 pm
Title: Part 13

Strawberry shortcake... I can imagine Parker's reaction to that. She loves her high fashion and was born for it.

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Date: 27/08/18 08:09 pm
Title: Part 12

She's dying? No!!!!

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Date: 27/08/18 08:03 pm
Title: Part 11

Hearts...not his tho. Oh wowzy.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:59 pm
Title: Part 10

Your chapters are so short and nice...like blurts of brilliance.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:56 pm
Title: Part 9

I hope she totally makes him pay. Big freaking time.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:54 pm
Title: Part 8

Anything IS possible. This is so freaking scary tho.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:50 pm
Title: Part 7

Abuse begetting abuse. Yep. That happens too much. Scary. Scary scary . You're really good at writing.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:46 pm
Title: Part 6

Ffff. God. Ugh. Scary.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:43 pm
Title: Part 5

Uhhh he can't stop himself. Scary.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:38 pm
Title: Part 4

It keeps getting better and better. Scarier too.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:32 pm
Title: Part 3

THanks for including Broots. I hated he was excluded from the first Pretender novel. He made the show.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:27 pm
Title: Part 2

 I so hate the thought of Parker being abducted..by anyone but Jarod... and this is so scary already.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:20 pm
Title: Part 1

Hell of a beginning! Well written too.

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Date: 27/08/18 07:18 pm
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