Oh wow, this is getting crazy- I mean that in the best of ways. Clicking to next chapter now.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed




Date: 01/06/10 09:18 am
Really terrific !!! Paul is as sick as Lyle and that's really frightening. Please continue the story, I'd really love what mad plans the mean ones are going to make and I'd really love to know how Jarod, Miss Parker & Co are going to outsmart them and destroy them in the end. KEEP WRITING !!!
Reviewer: Nathou Anonymous




Date: 22/08/05 08:23 pm
The story is very good. I hope that you will continue it. It is really frightening and I'd like to read more of it. I hope that Paul is not going to kill Parker.
Reviewer: LILY Anonymous




Date: 19/08/05 09:01 pm