Positive thinking. Hoping Miss Parker is right.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 01:28 am
Thought Ethan was about to punch Jarod...wouldn't want that.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 01:01 am
Crazy stuff.....but you write it well.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:54 am
what fun this is going to be lol.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:49 am
Strawberry shortcake lol.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:46 am
She HAS to survive. Jarod has to save her and kill Paul.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:36 am
Paul is definitely afflicted. I hope Jarod will "cure" him lol.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:33 am
What might happen indeed. Oooh really good.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:30 am
Get 'im Miss Parker. That's the spirit. I'm glad she's not broken.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:28 am
I wonder if Mr Parker is behind this. Or Lyle. Argghhh.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:25 am
Reallly worried about Miss Parker but yea the Paul douche was abused as a child. It's not his fault.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:21 am
OhhhH finally Ethan. Oh goddd. That Paul douche is nuts. Good job.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:18 am
I hope Jarod will give Paul the "help" he wants lol. Good job. I'm seriously loving this.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:15 am
Noooooo. Miss Parker can't die.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:12 am
ooooh uuuh. I'm hoping someone will start looking for her. Lot of unspoken words between Broots and Sydney and between Ethan and Jarod. I know Ethan will help...ummm I hope. Great writing.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:08 am
Oh honey your muse is doing just fine and so are you. I like this. Very dark and Miss Parker seems to be in trouble but I definitely am enjoying this.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:03 am
Ok so what has MP done now?? lol I hope she's not suicidal.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:00 am
Geeezzz, creepy is putting this Paul character mildly! Interesting insight from all the characters. Greeat writing as well! More updates on Jarod's last dream, Ethan and Parker's whereabouts, and Lyle's torture storyline with Paul. So what's with the all the hearts from all the victims, what's behind this storyline? A lot to build on. Hope you add more soon.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/06/10 01:35 am
mwahhhh!! *evil, evil laughter*
"I am Mr. Lyle. And for the next few hours you are going to remember that for the rest of your life."
Timeless words, timeless ending, timeless fic! I loved it! I'm startled by even the familiar sounds of my house at the moment (ancient old houses, while charming, seem to have a language all their own) and I won't be sleeping tonight, that said, perfect fic! A real thriller. I will definitely revisit this one.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:38 am
oh my...no, no, please don't let it be the end for Parker..
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:31 am
Ewww, creepy son of a .. you have really created a monster, that's a testament to your skills as an incredible author.
3:30 AM and I'm completely creeped out, all thanks to you! *reaches for butcher knife and flashlight, grips cell phone tighter*
Great job!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:30 am
Oh wow, brotherly concern is nice. Love Lyle, hmm, gorgeous devil.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:21 am
Oh my...I hate this son of a bitch!!! I hope he pays in the end. I hope Parker will be alright, this is worse than being imprisoned by jarod...um, I think. ;) Such a well written fic though, loving it.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:20 am
