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Title: 17 : Bethesda

You've gotta continue this. Biggest qualm is that Lyle is sick! Parker is too weak in this one, and where the heck is her gun in all this?!? Really out of character for her. Interesting plotlines and well written. Actually riveting for each chapter.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 08:50 am
Title: 17 : Bethesda

This is such a good story - what a great pity it is unfinished!

Perhaps, in the near future, you might consider finishing this ?  It is far too good to leave without a proper ending! 

 

 Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/05/08 07:47 pm
Title: Prologue : Shadows Fall

Great story so far! You've gotten me hooked!

 Reviewer: M Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/05 05:03 pm
Title: 4 : Surprise!

I really enjoyed reading this! Great job!

 Reviewer: AngelWings Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/05/05 09:56 pm
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