Ok I'm stupid. I think this is incomplete and that's why I'm so confused lol.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 14/04/20 11:47 pm
I think this might be incomplete? Or I'm really stupid. I enjoyed it. I'm not sure what happened next. Is there more of this?
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 14/04/20 11:45 pm
Wait. Did I miss something?
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 14/04/20 11:43 pm
Judge Jarod. Me likes.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed




Date: 14/04/20 11:40 pm
I can't tell if I'm reading each installment in the right order but I love it. It's really cool.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed




Date: 14/04/20 11:36 pm
...I pressed enter accidentally before I was finished with my review and that's because of what happened in the first paragraphs. Jarod pulling Parker on him. Gawds. None of the ladies can resist Jarod's charms. Except Miss Parker and a couple of other fans who I won't name for my protection lol. Good job with this.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed




Date: 14/04/20 11:31 pm
OMG that beginning. Wows. loll
Reviewer: Leslie Signed




Date: 14/04/20 11:27 pm
Hi that was good I always wonded what happen after the subway explosive now I new. Can't wait to read the other stroy.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous




Date: 07/01/14 03:08 am
Sounds good so far. More updates or sequel.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous



Date: 23/02/10 06:58 pm
Ok, I'm not reading ANY Of what you claimed in the summery, AND you stated this was completed.
Reviewer: AcaciaJules Signed

Date: 10/01/10 07:27 pm