Bravo! I'll never get enough!

Sydney, Sydney, Sydney. He's always so tormented, always forced into painful situations.

I have to wonder if Jarod can ever forgive this.

I look forward to finding out soon. 😉😎

Bravo! Impressive as always. I didn't expect this. I was certain they would do genetic testing to be sure before sleeping together, and I'm glad they didn't. Jarod was right. Whatever the results they are in love and results won't change that, and shouldn't prevent the relatiionship from evolving.

I would have loved to have read more of the conversation I know they must have had between chapter 21 and chapter 22, the conversation they talked about having, and of course as always it would have been nice to have seen their lovemaking. I know you don't like writing those parts. You've voiced your disdain for it in the past, You think you don't write smut well. You write everything brilliantly. You bring a visual to the sex aspect of writing. I think your use of anatomically correct terminology and how you make the act of consenting so hot makes the smut and sex scenes you write so much more oomph-ful and powerful.

NOthing against other authors' uses of slang but it doesn't have the same impact. I appreciate that you don't use slang when you're writing the sex. I once read a BOOK where the famous author used a word that refers to a rooseter, and I couldn't stop laughing. I was visualizing a rooster, a cat, and a donkey somewhere along my reading of that novel because that author used so much slang.

But if you want to use slang I won't mind. I just miss reading your hot sex scenes. It's been a while since you've written any.

Please continue writing either way.  I can always go back and read your other stories and enjoy those sex scenes.

More please?

Until next time, Mirage,

Ciao!

Sydney is in trouble now.
This really highlights the rock–hard place of Sydney's career. I know in Forces of Nature you do the same and really showcase the pain Sydney and caused. He was the adult, and unlike Parker he wasn't indoctrinated into the life. He woukd have been killed and replaced but still... Yeah. You nail it

Ohh oh what a delicious feast this was for my hungry shipper heart! I can see their sleepy faces, hear their playful pillow talk. I knew it couldn't always last with them still dealing with the past, and possibly really closely related. There will be bad times, hard painful times, but I love the treat you gave us here. So beautiful.

Amazing!

🥰 The way he watches her 😴 sleep 🥰 🥰 🥰

The cuteness ensues and I'm here for it. He watched her when they made love too?! BOTH times?!!!

You didn't show us that sex but I get it. I know you hate writing that part but please remember how much we love and live to read that part.

Everything was going well until they went downstairs and saw Sydney. They don't want to delay their relationship and lives but they also still have some painful issues to talk about and although they are already talking it's going to take a while to resolve things.

I think Sydney's additional confessions caught them both off guard and Parker wanted to silence and repress but Jarod wants to hear more and get to the truth and it seems that he suspected some of this back when he met with lyle and took that painting.  Lyles warning about Parker and Lyle's concern had to confuse Jarod and make him wonder about what else might have happened.

It's dark stuff Mirage and definitely plausible. You really fill in the blanks that the TV series left behind, and you make the tv series make sense.

It can't be easy.

I appreciate your work and thank you .

Congratulations on this chapter.

It's so amazing to see them so in love and able to show it. 

More please?  ðŸ™�ðŸ�¼

Oh woot woot! I'm so in love with the way Jarod is so in love with Parker. You capture the essence of the series, the behaviors and expressions that make them who they are and make me so addicted to them. You have that certain special something that some authors have, that quality of keep the characters in their places and in character and being able to capture and hold my attention. I'm so addicted. I can't get enough.

I can't wait to know what happens next.

I'm grinning 😀 like a fool!

"Impure and complex blasphemy" my god they flirt so cutely and so hotly.🤪🫨🥵🤯

I need more!