Please update this!!

Oomph. My heart. This is plausible and exquisitely written, and that makes it all the more painful.
The characters are all on point. I'm curious about how you'll continue to write Jarod's family and the living arrangements. So far you've written that aspect differently compared to others. As I've said before they don't all happily reside in one house when you write them. That's plausible, bang on realistic.

Parker is someone who is used to being alone. You seem to understand that and the difficulties it presents.

I'm glad you're continuing to explorie her vulnerabilities and this inner sense stuff. I would like to see some reason and some resolve for the prenomintions she had in TP2001 and the inner sense she had briefly in TP2001 and for seeing Thomas, Faith, and Angel in IOTH.

It must be difficult to write her. You take great care in portraying her and all of the characters accurately. You excel at finding a balance.

I love the continuity, her fear of being crazy, like her mother who she once called weak during the series and "off the deep end" in one episode.

I love Ian's reaction upon meeting Miss P. That innocence, his truth. His heart is on his sleeve.

This is still bang on bloody awesome and I can't wait to read the rest of it.

More please?

Powerful! 💪 My god but your ability to plunge me into the scenes is beyond amazing. You're working 🪄 magic.. there's an old song" you can do magic 🪄 ✨ you know damn well when you cast your spell 🪄 ✨ 🪄 ✨ ✨ " and damn here I am under your spell.

You kids these days RULE.

The plausibility is present and accounted for ✔�

Characters in character ✔�

Dialogue ✔�

Seamless transition work ✔�

Descriptive work ✔�

Storytelling ✔�

Plotting ✔�

I need more ✔�

Oh I love this. Eloquently written and really raw too. I find this profound and succinct.

I will be reading and reviewing more of you .

I'm really upset about election results in the US and will escape with your fiction. I don't know how to get myself regulated mentally again but you are helping. You pull me in and I think only of the story you illustrate.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart ��

I'm EVEN MORE STOKED now!

Oh my Goddesses!

I have election anxiety even though I'm not in the United States. Fingers crossed that Harris wins by a (cue Stevie Nicks) Landside...

The US doesn't need a rapist in the white house. They already TWO rapists on the Supreme Court. What is it about the US and rapists? They LOVE Them some rapists.

yeah so anyhoo!

I'm glad you don't have to worry about that... well then again being a victim of the rapist's foreign policies will suck. Poor Palestine and Ukraine aren't going to exist anymore if the rapist...

NO. I won't put that in the universe.

Anxiety!!

I hope you're ok. I don't know where in the world you are but I hope you're well.

I love this story. I love all of them and will be reading everything here tonight. If you have recommendations hit me with them please. Do you recommend your Circles of Hell or Forces of Nature? Where should I begin again?

I need to lose myself in reading for a few days until it's clear that there was a BLUE Landside tsunami wave.

I wish you would update constantly.

So much excitement. Really painful chapter but I trust you to do right by them...you always have.

Mad respect!

Thank you

More!

🌹🌹 🌹 🌹 Bravo Mirage! � 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Sorrowful and beautiful.

I think Jarod is growing on you.

I foresee them becoming closer.  I walk with you wherever you lead.

More please?

Until next time,

Ciao!

You never kill without a reason so I hope this will be the reason Parker smokes the Centre for good.

I decided when Broots said, "has anyone seen that little kid"  that the boy is dead. He has health problems. This is extremely plausible. It's beautiful and painful.

Please let them be together. They deserve it.

I love this.

Oh 😱 😯 this went painful really subtly, so I could see the sky darkening before the lightning ⚡ strike. You were really gentle about it and genius!

I love the nice transition from light with some clouds to full storm and flooding pain.

The Halloween feels are present.

Such a gift � � � to be able to read you Mirage.

I'm thankful 🥰 🥰 🥰.

More please?

Breaking me heart.

I feel so bad for Jarod and Parker.

I love your writing.

Your voice is powerful and so wonderful.

I want more and more.

Please? �

Ok and I thought chapter 1 was kind of tragic. Pope on a Rope!

THIS is tragic. So very completely tragic.

But it started out as normal as any scene with Jarod and Miss Parker possibly could.

lol that ain't saying a lot but you know what i mean.

Her saying, "I know THAT look" when she told him about communicating with ghosts.

Jarod still being freaked out that he has a clone that looks and is bascially him.

That was hilarious.

And the clone. My GOD! Ian. He is too precious. I love his "I'm really nervous." So like Jarod. So honest and sweet.

You liked young Jarod better didn't you

didn't you didn't you??

Anyhoo. I love this.

Tragic but that's realistic.

Please write more soon. I need more of you in my life.

Thank you for this too. Don't think I don't appreciate all that you've given and take it for granted BUT know that I still want more. and more and more and more.

I love you!!

Oooooohhh nooooo. This chapter truly was an experience that touched all of the senses, including extreme sadness. I feel it all so much. I need more. Now. You're so addicting.

More please?

Oh that poor child.

I almost expected this from the television series because the boy was just gone.

Born. We didn't see much of him. And no talk of him in TP2001.

Then Broots even seemed to think the boy was dead in IOTH lol.

You write children well but this cleans up the entire mess that would been made and you don't have to write kiddos. I think Jarod and Parker should get to reclaim the friendship without having to be forced into parenthood too.

It's not fair. If the series came back to television a kid would make us understand if they didn't have sex or whatever if either of them objected to those scenes or whatever.

But I would like to see them figure it out without the pressure of parenthood.

I love this. I love that they are embracing as friends sharing grief and I hope they will build on that.

You write beautifully. It's so exquisite. I want more.

Congratulations on this second beautiful and painful chapter!