Great story, I hope you finish it
Very funny
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed



[Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:28 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed



[Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:28 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed



[Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:28 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed



[Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:27 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:27 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:27 am
You 've got to be kidding me ! Just when it was getting interessting Ireally hope that you ill continue this story someday . Until then I cross fingers .
Reviewer: tana Signed


[Report This]Date: 11/07/16 08:47 am
Outstanding! This is definitely a keeper! Gotta have more updates to this one. You just captured true Pretender Series writing form. This has so many possibilities and wish it were part of the series DVD!
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous



[Report This]Date: 06/01/10 05:01 am
Great! Please ccontinue this! Brootses remarks are so funny!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/06/09 02:46 pm
I'm loving this story. Hope you post more soon.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous



[Report This]Date: 06/04/07 06:56 pm
great story, conflictin characters an amusing situations... Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: bloodymary2 Anonymous



[Report This]Date: 25/06/05 08:49 pm
