Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Top notch mate! Your descriptive work is brilliant. The Centre aspect has always been fascinating and you provide the perfect amount of backstory to catch us up on the Adama's replacement.
Anithet stroke of genius was the statue. Jarod being treated well and like an asset instead of a slave is ...that should be obvious to any corporation that believes employees are assets! I love that. The pat on the back to help employees fall to their death was spot on too. I love Parker's emphasis on ass when talking about Jarod being an asset lol.
I know they will control Jarod some way. I love that Jarod will be attending a celebration with Parker having no choice but to be present.
She is feeling awful and I can imagine..Sh was going to set him free until Lyle showed if I'm not mistaken.
The bickering between siblings, the threats, ahhh it's like watching an episode of the pretender. That really is the spirit....and soul and heart of the pretender you're writing. You're brilliant mate. Thank you for this. Please continue. Much love and gratitude .
Reviewer: Jake Signed
Date: 18/04/24