Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #04 Anything
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 118
Read Count: 2454
The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.
Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.
Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.
Not bad, I can see her wanting to hurt him. But I love your story "Breathing" so much better.
Dark but interesting story. Not sure I understand all of it
Reviewer: RaChell SignedLMAO! This is a hoot and a half! I'll never ba able to hear that name again without smiling. Thanks for the laughs!
Cute! Love the fire and color you wrote it with, interesting plot.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedNicely done! You can almost see the look on both of their faces. Good job of packing lots of impact into so few words!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery intense! So nicely done and yet so gut wrenching at the same time. Glad to have read it.
It seems I've read this before and it's just as moving now as it was then. You can almost feel the emotions from the characters come to life. Nice job!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedSequel! Sequel! Sequel! This is a delight, a real gem of a story and you can't just leave it like it is! You must do a sequel!
Nicely done! Great story and plot line. So very tender and yet so .... not sure if the words un-nerving, errie or .... disturbing is the right word. Sure to be one of those stories that stay with you long after you've read it.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedReally intense, not sure I quite get all of it. But it is interesting.
Author's Response: Yay, glad you liked it.
You guys write well but I really have a hard time with this story.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedEven after all this time this story still makes me cry. It's one of my favorites you wrote Zanna.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedWell I remember this one well! One of the first TP stories I read. :) You need to post your other stories, Yip.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedA perfect ten! Of course I am bias, afterall I got to write the sequel. ;)
Reviewer: RaChell SignedAnother good story! I always like this one.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedI always loved this story. It touched a subject so sadly ignored. The possibility that Jarod could go off the deep end is fascinating.
Very good! I'm impressed with this story and it's well written! Bravo!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedNicely done fic. I like the way you show Jarod's caring side. Sorry about your friend, that must have been quite a shock.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Today was the anniversary of her death. Her sister, brother and parents are still not over it even if it happened a long time ago.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery good! It really sums up Broots' feeling for Miss Parker.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedGreat story and so well done. I like the way you keep her in character.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedLoved it. (sniff, sniff) It must be that it brings out the J/MP 'shipper in me. (blows nose and wipes a tear away) Nicely done and leaves me with a warm fuzzy feeling. Thanks!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedNicely done and interesting story line. This one shows more thought and I like how have them interact again after jarod's escape. But you wonder if the Centre is looking for Miss Parker and Thomas as well as Jarod.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Very nice! Love the conect the dots you did with the detectives and Miss Parker's reaction to Broots' plight. Possible sequel? This story is too good not to continue!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery sad and touching. It would have been better had you slowed down and fleshed the story out more. But overall it's good.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery good! I like the story, it's interesting and I can see you really tried to slow down and be more detailed then some of your previous stories. I'm so happy to see that you did that! It still feels like you're trying to find a balance between writing too fast or too slow. That delicate balance takes time so don't feel discouraged. I'll be the first to admit, I haven't reached that point yet and I often drag things out. But you are getting there and this story doesn't feel rushed!
I liked the details and I'm hoping you will continue with a chapter 2. This is a very nice start. :)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed