Ah, fantastic, Leonie! I'm so glad you wrote AND posted your fic. It was a great read and it read very fast. Ooh, you nailed Lyle- gorgeous but so bad, haha. And you actually made me feel a bit sorry for poor Jarod (something that rarely happens). Also, I believe that no pretender fic is complete without the inclusion of some Brootsie, so yay, you! My only other thought is: Where will you take us next? I want to know what Miss Parker will do now, how well she'll interact with Baby Parker, if she'll evade the Centre permanently, and- well, you get the idea.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! I have already written 7 chapters in total, I'm gonna upload the next one today! I had it up on FF.com for some time now, but I like this page so much better^^
I don't know where it ends yet or even how long the story is going to be, but I will update regulary... or as regulary as a student can :)
By the way, I'm german, so please excuse any mistakes I made/will make!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/11 09:21 am