Finally a new story! And I love it!! I hope that it will become a very long story! You know what would be cool? When they find out Amy is his sister and so on . . . could be before he finds out about Major Charles and Emily . . . But that's just my wish - me - a - happy end - for - Jarod - thinking :) (and it would be a reason why she wouldn't fall in love with him, subcounsiously), so better ignore this part of my review ;)
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
That's a grand idea. Afraid it won't happen, but it's a grand idea nonetheless.
At present it is indeed proving to be a rather long story. I always intend my things to be shortish, and then details happen and they get very long. More in coming...
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/07/09 04:40 pm