Oh, this is so nice! And it is an improvement, I think, in the way of emotional depth and the characters' reasoning behind their actions, but also because of the small observations of the small behaviours that mean so much but aren't usually taken notice of.

I'll be waiting for any future chapters.

I'd give it a rating too, but I'm terribly awful at them. It truly frightens me when a questions starts with 'On a scale of one to ten'.

Regards,

planet p.

P.S.: From FF.Net.