What a great chapter ...so well written and as always, you have left us hanging by a thread ....please, please update soon!!!!!! This is such a great story and is worthy of being an episode !
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/10/08 02:36 pm
This story is just so good! I hope they find her alive but someone is after that little girl and Jarod. I wonder who it is? Update soon, plz!!!
Reviewer: Quita Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/10/08 06:34 am
Why didn't he kiss her!!!! I love this story and this update. I hope you update very soon!
Reviewer: Quita Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/09/08 11:19 pm
This is really great, Please update soon. i can't wait to see where you'll take this. Great character deveopment by the way.
Reviewer: Shadow Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/09/08 05:09 am
WOW - I don't think I can stand all this tension !!!!!
As always, a superb chapter!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/08 04:15 pm
Please, don't tell me that this last sentence means that he's telling goodbye in a way??? he can't just decide it's over just because they could posssibly, maybe, hurt each other?? What is he? Stupid? For a genius, Jarod sure did not act very clever! hope to read soon another chapter from that so wonderful story!
Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 10/09/08 10:39 pm
Gah! What a place to leave us hanging!!
More, pretty please?
Reviewer: Taryn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/09/08 05:38 am
I loved it! I can totally see this story being a pretender episode or movie! Keep it up, when are you expecting to have a new chapter out?
Author's Response:
Hi Christy!
Thanks for your review. I have a lot of work to do at the moment, but I'll start working on the next chapter over the weekend... Hopefully I'll have it out by Sunday. :)
Cheers,
Shannon
Reviewer: Kristy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/08/08 12:15 am
Keep Going! YOu have me in suspense! I love it!
Reviewer: dark angel Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/08/08 03:29 pm
I am so glad you have posted this story to "Missing Pieces" .......I am so enjoying reading this. It is truly a lovely, heart-warming tale .....so well written with excellent characterisation. I love the way you are developing, very slowly, the relationship between MissP and Jarod ... you have captured their personalities so well.
Please, please continue with this .....it is an excellent piece of writing! I look forward each day to the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/08/08 01:33 pm