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Title: Chapter 30

That ended really suddenly but it was a good story and I will recommend it and other favs to some friends. Congrats.

 Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/17 12:20 am
Title: Chapter 30

Really interesting.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/17 03:21 am
Title: Chapter 30

I adore ! I A-DORE ! !

 Reviewer: tana Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/16 02:02 pm
Title: Chapter 30

Nice twists and turns within the story! Couldn't stop reading! Good take on the Sydney and Major conflict. More believable that it would be Jacob since Sydney was more focused on work, but the author can take the reader anywhere they wanted.

 Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 07:20 am
Title: Chapter 30

I don't mind telling you that the end of the last chapter was terrifying. The dream sequence accomplished and interesting conclusion and resolution.

 A bit out of the ordinary but that is what makes fanfiction fun.

Thanks for the ride. 

 Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/08 05:22 pm
Title: Chapter 30

okay, interesting ending. bit abrupt, but otherwise good. ;-)

 Reviewer: whashaza Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/07/08 05:10 pm
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