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Title: Chapter 28

Sydney considering suicide is something I didn't see coming really but I can see he's feeling upset. Very interesting.

Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/17 12:16 am
Title: Chapter 28

MP was right to not trust Sid...

Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/17 03:19 am
Title: Chapter 28

This is getting so good! i hope you post soon! i can't wait to read more. I just want to let you know that for a person whose writing in a 2nd language you are doing great. i have taken 4 years of German and still write very badly.

Reviewer: janeway Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 11:48 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Typical of what I'd expect from Sydney. His own daughter and again he sells her out. Just think if he would have allowed her to help him he could have also helped their relationship.

Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/05/08 11:47 pm
Title: Chapter 28

OH MY GOD! Such a beautiful turn of events!!! It's horrible for Sydney because he has to choose between his children but we know he's gonna give them Parker... I was not expecting such a thing but that's why your fanfic is so interesting!!! Poor Parker, she's going to lose faith in the human nature (if she hasn't already) and Jarod is gonna be very pissed off because of Sydney's decision... Even if we know he has no choice in the matter... Very well done, I love your fanfic... Hope to have the next chapter very quickly!!!

Reviewer: Faith Parker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/08 08:07 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Poor Sydney. What a choice. Not one he made easily. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/08 03:23 pm
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