Am still having problems with the security code but I want to review every chapter I read because writing seems hard and you earned the reviews. ;)
Jarod getting angry! I love it.
'Why, Sydney, are YOU going to give her that affection and appreciation?' He turned to his mentor, 'Or behind all this lies the fact that your problem is that YOU’RE not the one she trusts?'
[Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:05 am
It's getting better and better.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:35 pm
J hasn't told Parker they slept together...I can't wait
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/17 03:10 am
I'm so happy to read you again!
Nice sequel, and well, Bucky had already said everything that needed to be said!!
So keep writing for us!!
Reviewer: Angelina Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/02/08 04:54 pm
I hope Parker doesn't make too easy on Sydney, after all he did make Jarod his priority. It was like that in some of the episodes too. Sydney cared, but it never seemed that MP was the priority.
There were many times it seemed that if MP hadn't been as strong as she was she would not have survived the Centre. Jarod in his own strange way was there more than Sydney, in your story that was definitely the case.
Good writing, and interesting story.
[Report This]Date: 21/02/08 04:58 pm
