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Title: Chapter 18

So I was relieved they are still alive but my lord so much happened. I read this several times.

 Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/17 06:36 am
Title: Chapter 18

Big improvement in grammar. It's so much easier to read. Great job.

 Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/17 11:26 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Big improvement in grammar. It's so much easier to read. Great job.

 Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/17 11:26 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Cool. I think MP questioning everything is right on.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/17 02:19 am
Title: Chapter 18

Will you write the sequel?

I saw that your website (where there was yur story) doesn't exist anymore, so are you giving it up?

Please, say no, I will write the sequel *geez* I can't wait anymore to read you again here.

 Reviewer: Angelina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/08/07 03:13 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Very nice and long overdue!  Love the tormented feelings of Major Charles, you did that part so very well you can almost see the hostile look on his face when dealing with Sydney and the bitter confortation between him and Miss Parker.  Looking forward to another chapter.

 

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/07 12:11 pm
Title: Chapter 18

I already read this on your other website, and it finished at the 18th chapter (as here now). So I really really want the sequel, it's a great story, and I want to know what would happen with Parker and Jarod.

 Reviewer: Angelina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/07/07 10:13 am
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