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Title: Chapter 16

It's so hard to read Jarod in so much pain. Lyle is like I remember.

 Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/17 06:34 am
Title: Chapter 16

I hope Jarod kicks Lyle's a$$.

 Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/17 11:21 pm
Title: Chapter 16

Sid chose jarod over MP. :(

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/17 02:07 am
Title: Chapter 16

Very nice, love the one liners.  You have Miss Parker's sharp wit  and tongue in character.  Like the fact that you play everything out so the reader can mentally picture it happening.  You're very good about leaving things hanging so it's very suspenceful.

  I look forward to your next chapter.
 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/07 11:29 am
Title: Chapter 16

I am so happy that you decided to pick this story back up.

I love how you keep the tension steady through the different chapters.  Can't wait to see what their plans are and what the triumvirate want's with the both of them.

I am looking forward to your next chapter. 

 Reviewer: Eden Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/04/07 02:59 pm
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