Oh no it's not finished.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:33 pm
I think you handled the love making part well. The tensions are still high. I don't know if that will dissipate. It's a tense time and the characters are all tense. The tension makes the show.
Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 06:33 am
I like the relationships between everyone. REally like this story.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:20 pm
Oh Miss Parker. Didn't see that 1 coming.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/17 02:05 am
I LOVE your story!!
I read chapters 16, 17 and 18 on an another website, and it's so intense, I can't stand not knowing what would happen next!! The characters are so *REAL*, so themselves!!
I want to read your other stories on the other website but I'm affraid to mix evrything up, so I prefer to finish reading this one!!
So please, update sooooooon!!
Reviewer: Dirlala Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/07 01:55 pm
First time I've ever reviewed here. This is great; I personally think they're all in character. I love evil Lyle; good Jarod and a Parker who's 'tough as nails' and hard to figure out. Speaking of Parker, what evil plans do they have in mind for her? Can't wait to find out and thank you for sharing your gift of writing with us.
Reviewer: ascii27 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/03/07 12:11 pm
I love your story. i read it on fanfiction and was wondering if you were planning on changing any of it? Either it will be great.
[Report This]Date: 21/03/07 08:10 pm
Great story!! I can't wait for more!!
But, just one question: why NC 18??
I really love the interaction between the characters, especially between Jarod and Parker!! Go on, don't stop writting!!
Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/07 11:44 am
Great story, I really hope you keep it coming, I love it. I really love relationship between parker & Jarod. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!
Reviewer: Allie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/07 02:37 am
