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Title: Chapter 14

Hey if you like !'s use 'em. They are fine and it's your story. I have no complaints.

 Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 09:29 pm
Title: Chapter 14

Hot. I like your steam and hope there will be more in this. Good job.

 Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/17 11:19 pm
Title: Chapter 14

I would have liked more details in the sex but it still is very interesting.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/17 02:01 am
Title: Chapter 14

I LOVE THIS STORY, I HOPE YOU CONTINUE WITH IT SOON.  I REALLY LOVE JAROD AND PARKER TOGETHER.   KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.

 Reviewer: Cally24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/03/07 08:19 am
Title: Chapter 14

you bet we want more... the story is great! i love your writing.

can't wait for more.

btw, i know everyone wants it, but don't say it... so, i'm gonan say it..

a little smuttyness would be great, too :o)

 Reviewer: Anyho Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/03/07 05:51 am
Title: Chapter 14

Love it, Please keep it up, so far one of my favorites

 Reviewer: Natasha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/03/07 03:45 am
Title: Chapter 14

Zsazsa

  • Great so far. Yes please write more chapters.  I hope Jarod and miss parker can get out of this.

 Reviewer: Amber Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/03/07 11:32 pm
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