Very good. I love it. You did a great job. I'm just happy I got a weapon. LOL
Nice to see you are writing again. I hope to see another one from you soon. (wink, wink)
Author's Response: Hmm, I suppose this is meant to butter me up so I'll finish the one I am doing for you huh? ;) Reviewer: Gena Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/01/07 09:50 pm
Minimalistic yet with lots of emotion. Obviously that chapter was not the literal turning point that one'd expect, but I am hoping there'll be much much more we can tune our not so innocent minds into.. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Mira but I don't do smut or NC-17 well so you'll have to settle for this . And I think that the reader's imagination is quite capable of suppling their own fantasy. LOL!
Date: 08/01/07 07:09 am
Nice job. Your writing is clean and crisp. Nice description work which adds to the moment in time style. Can't wait for you to add to it.
Author's Response: Thanks Bucky. But for me to continue I need your input on chapter 3. LOL! :)
Date: 27/12/06 09:24 pm
yay rachell it looks great, the colour really makes it impressive, and i just love the U2 version of that song too, great first chapter.
Author's Response: I never could have done the color without you Jacs! I owe you. :)
Date: 26/12/06 05:58 am