Hi that was a very good story.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/05/17 02:17 am
This is another keeper of a story. Good plot lines.
Reviewer: elect Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/12/09 11:50 pm
Wow, I loved your story, regardless of the glaring lack of commas and the misuse of tenses. You've got a well-devised PLOT and great action, as well as romance - things I like most in a good story. I stayed up all night reading it, and now I have no time to go to sleep, as I've got to be up already... :)
Thanks for writing this! :)
Reviewer: Mia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/02/08 07:12 pm
I stayed up till like 2am to finish reading, it was excellent. One of the closest to in-character I've seen in a long time!
Reviewer: Mel Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/09/07 12:33 am
thanks for writing this! looking fwd to reading is sequel.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed [Report This]Date: 09/07/07 12:38 pm
That was an intense ride and i hope Alex really is dead this time and Lyle finally gets exactly what he deserves!!!
Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/07 07:04 am
Wow, I loved your story and I surely want a sequel. I so want to know what we happen now that everyone is ''safe''. Very good story!
Reviewer: winnieAlex Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/02/06 05:06 am
Your fanfic was very good !!! But the end is somewhat abrupt, now you have to show us how Jarod will fight against the Centre or how he will destroy it. I'd also like to know how he deals with his newly found family and his former pursuers on an everyday basis 'not easy) : conflicts, jalousy, anger, friendship, hate, love...whatever it is. But in any case keep writing, because I'd love to have more than just one fanfic. So a sequel would be real fun !!!
Reviewer: Miss Nathou Love Signed [Report This]Date: 23/02/06 10:24 pm
Sure I want a sequel!! As ever, this chapter is very good. Sorry if I was too eager ; S I love your story but the end upsets me a little, it's too easy for them, I mean, the Center will still hunt them. They have to destroy it.
Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/02/06 10:23 pm