The story really has picked up and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. The only complaint I have is that you've surpassed MP's chapter quota of 20 chapters and It's a b*tch to have to scroll thru the previous 20 or so chapters to get to the most recent one.
Author's Response: There's a chapter quota? Good to know.. now. Haha oh well I guess. Too late now. Will remember for my next story I suppose. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 24/04/07 08:56 pm
great story ............... keep up the good work. (he says while anxiously awaitig more.)
Author's Response: Thank you, sir! Will do.
Date: 11/04/07 02:30 pm
oh no is she going to run away from them?
Author's Response: Telling would spoil the fun! I think at this point, MP doesn't even know what to do.
Date: 10/04/07 10:11 am
Oh what a conflicted MP you presented us with.. with i think is perfect and very true to her character!! I'm nervous about where Lyle is, and the introduction of pop-tarts scene with Cade was so precious! Great chappie.. thanks for sharing :D
Author's Response: Poor MP is always in complete conflict with herself and everyone around her! I'm glad you think it's true to her character, because I certainly think so. Thanks so much. :)
Date: 09/04/07 11:44 pm