Chapter 4: Secrets
Unusual for Jarod to forget to ask someone's name ... but I'll let it slide! MP is appropriately brusque i.e. you write her well...seems more like S1 or S2 MP, especially with the cigarette. Nice plotline...but please, you have to finish this story...don't keep us in suspense so long again, Sabs!!
Anto, Ooh, TWO reviews! I'm so SPEEEcial! Thanks! As I told you in the IM, I did it on purpose, but thanks for noticing! As for the timeline, I didn't really think the MP from post-IOTH would work in that scene, but I wasn't consciously thinking about it... I took a couple of MP's characteristics, throughout the series, and just mixed 'em together.
Keep encouraging me, and keeping me accountable, and by golly, you shall have your ending, hopefully!!! ^_^ Keep it up, and you shall always have advance notice w/ it. And, again, thanks!
Reviewer: Miss Parker Signed