Penname: Miss Parker [Contact]

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Summary: A restless night promising no respite. An unwelcome visitor. Drama ensues. All in the life of a Pretender. Or so he thinks..

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character, Other Centre Character, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 6205
Read Count: 8061
[Report This] Published: 17/12/06 Updated: 18/01/07


Title: Chapter 4: Secrets

Unusual for Jarod to forget to ask someone's name ... but I'll let it slide! MP is appropriately brusque i.e. you write her well...seems more like S1 or S2 MP, especially with the cigarette. Nice plotline...but please, you have to finish this story...don't keep us in suspense so long again, Sabs!!

Author's Response:

Anto, Ooh, TWO reviews! I'm so SPEEEcial! Thanks! As I told you in the IM, I did it on purpose, but thanks for noticing! As for the timeline, I didn't really think the MP from post-IOTH would work in that scene, but I wasn't consciously thinking about it... I took a couple of MP's characteristics, throughout the series, and just mixed 'em together.

Keep encouraging me, and keeping me accountable, and by golly, you shall have your ending, hopefully!!!  ^_^ Keep it up, and you shall always have advance notice w/ it. And, again, thanks!

Reviewer: Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/01/07
Title: Chapter 1: A Dangerous Encounter

Nice descriptions, easy to read. Engaging beginning!

Author's Response: Anto, Thanks! Coming from you, that means a lot! ^_^

Reviewer: Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18/01/07
Summary: Miss Parker and Sydney are chasing Jarod through a forest when something unexpected happens. Title says it all ;^)

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 16579
Read Count: 2834
[Report This] Published: 17/01/07 Updated: 17/01/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this...even though I prefer MP not to be named...that name which I will not say! lol Great job kris!

Reviewer: Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18/01/07
Summary: A run in with Jarod has dire consequences for Miss Parker and a very uncertain future for both hunter and prey.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 20905
Read Count: 3548
[Report This] Published: 17/01/07 Updated: 17/01/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kris, you still use "damned" instead of "damn"...just wondering why...do you doubt the accuracy? I liked your story a lot the first time I read it, and second time around it was just as great. But then again, it's easy to please a J/MP shipper with a shipper story! I wish you wouldn't call her that name though! Really! And while I suppose people might like the use of profanity, I find it quite unnecessary since there are more creative ways for MP to be emphatic. So I'm glad you didn't use it too often! You write MP quite well with a few exceptions, but then again, nobody's perfect! Keep writing, especially great shipper stories! :)

Reviewer: Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18/01/07