Very hot indeed!  ;)

Oh please, don't have MP pregnant!  For someone who tries so hard to be in control of her life,  why would anyone think that Miss Parker would let this area be neglected?  She could have a IUD, on the pill or using the patch.  Just because Jarod's little solider isn't wearing a rubber rain coat doesn't mean some one isn't taking precautions.  Don't forget, more then one unlucky babe has found her self with a bun in the oven due to the failure of a latex shower cap.  
I'm not trying to belittle anyone but why can't Jarod and Miss Parker just have sex!  Does she have to be a baby factory  because the two of them fuck?  I know anything is possible in the world of fan fic but face it, what kind of parents would these two make?  Both had dysfunctional childhoods, their adult life hasn't been great or stable.
There must be at least one if not several little off springs of MP and Jarod running around the Centre!  If they cloned Gemini from Jarod, impregnated Catherine Parker with Major Charles' sperm, why not create a child from MP's ova and Jarod sperm?  
AtlantianDream, just continue doing what you seems to do very well and let these two character have a great tumble between the sheets.  Love the smut!



Author's Response: Ok....you have very valid points......but in the end I still have to think about it.  In the end the only real reason anyone is reading my story will continue on.

"Testing"
Wow, it says it all in chapter 3! I have to agree with M. Doc and Manoline, it truly fits the Centre.

Testing...that is what they are about! Sydney testing Jarod growing up and now twins and who ever else he can get his hands on to test. Raines testing the loyalties of others, Catherine Parker, Angelo and Ethan. And Mr. Parker, always testing Lyle and Miss Parker, even against each other. Who can forget the episode where he sends her to kill Lyle!

Then there is Jarod, always testing Miss Parker's faith in her father, the Centre and some times even her soul. The episode Keys comes to mind, when he tested her humanity re: saving the little girl's life. When they made their way through the storm to obtain vital antibiotics and forcing her to face the truth about her mother's beating. What about Bank? Testing her even there with Mr Feingor.

Miss Parker is not above testing herself. Watch how she tests Broots' loyalty. And what has he suffered for her? Sitting under Raines' desk while he attended to his personal needs. Stealing vital information, lying to Lyle (Flesh and Blood).

And what about Brigitte? She was tested and sadly for her it didn't turn out well in the end. Mutumbo even tested them in the season finale of season 3. Who can forget the power of his speech, what a dramatic delivery it was standing on the platform above them at the Centre, telling them they could not have chaos in the Centre. Ah yes, testing defines the Centre.

But it was Chapter 2 which brought tears to my eyes and really hit me in the gut. "Hey, Hey." Blade is right and no one could have put it better, "childish innocence, golden age of comedy", it sums up Jarod. But not only Jarod, it sums up the other characters too.

Mr. Parker in IOTH just before he jumps. "Hey, hey." describes that look on his face so well.

Mr. Raines when he washes Willie's feet. Nothing describes it better then "hey, hey".

"You're beautiful when you're angry." It's the look in Lyle's eyes, that little sparkle, that cute little grin. Akin to what Broots said in "Flesh and Blood" about the look that Lyle has when he's about to eat a steak raw. I could be wrong about the quote but still.... Nothing else can describe the look of raw passion for his sister.

"Hey, hey." You can almost hear it in the conversations between Sydney and Jarod with each phone call.

And don't forget that throaty look of"Hey, hey" between Miss Parker and Thomas when she's standing there wearing his shirt! It reeks of sexual connotation!

"Hey, hey", ........ two simple words that say so much.


Author's Response: I could not agree more with your analysis. It is insigtful and very accurate. It is like you are.... Angelo, and knew exactly what i was feeling as i was writing it. Truly amazing

While Jacs may not be a MP/Jarod shipper, I am! :) I've been so inspired by her story that I am in the process of writing one which should please those who are 'shippers.

In fact, I think I'll call it "It Isn't Easy!" in her honor. Thanks Jacs for inspiring me to reach for the stars. To stretch my writing skills which have remained dormant for so long, ones that I thought I would never exercise again.

You are my inspiration, my heroine, I am forever in your debt.


Author's Response: Oh thank you so much. It is such an honour and i am deeply indebted to you. I am glad my trifling little story could inspire you to writing again and look very much forward to seeing it.

I see the best is yet to come! 'more trouble on the way'.

Author's Response: Ahhh *sighs* indeed it is Patricia_D, as i am sure the next chapter will reveal.

Just when I didn't think it could get worse for Jarod!


Author's Response:

Nice to hear from you again =).

Things can always get worse.. but i will make a promise that they will get better... eventually ;) 

Enjoyed this very much.  I am looking forward to more.


Author's Response: Sorry about the wait! Next one is almost ready to come out! Thanks for the feedback :D

The only words that can desribe this is very calculating and controlled.  I can see this happening.


Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I am glad that you liked it!

Not the normal Pretender story.  Using Kyle gives it a nice change of pace and is refreshing to read.


Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that.  The last thing I'd want is for this to be boring.

Any thing in the near future?  I am looking forward to seeing a new chapter soon.

Author's Response: Working on it.  I have a new job so I've been busy with that right now.  Should be soon though.

Sweet!  Glad to see a update, hope you post more soon!

Author's Response:

I'm working on it. Thanks. :0)

Sweet and very funny!

Miss Parker or Brigitte?  I am stumped!

Author's Response: one is right, and one is wrong ;)