Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Challenges: Drabble #02 Song Titles
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Word count: 3241
Read Count: 1889
Good one. It was really sweet.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
English is not my native tongue and so I am trying to find the words. I like your story...but not the rape part..but your writing is well. I have the chill bumps for a second time reading here today but this time you are the author and reason for the chills bumps ;). This time the story isn't bitter sad and sweet with happy at the end but it is all scary. Poor Miss Parker. :(Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
This is really funny. Really funny! You write comedy really well!Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
I like your story. It was good!Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
I like your story. It was funny.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
I like your story.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
It is cute. I hope you will add more chapters.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
I like your story. It is pretty.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
I like your story.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
Good one here. I think it would be this way for her with Jarod. She's been alone since Thomas and I think it would hard to stop seeing Jarod as the enemy.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
I like this alot. Will you be writing more stories? I think you should do!!Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
In 2002, the corporation known as the Centre was infiltrated by various law enforcement agencies that acted in a synchronized global effort to eradicate the organization. And then one day, Jarod's huntress ran away.
I'm reading again. It's not darkJarod but ooh he definitely isn't too light and I love it. He's the perfect amount of darkness and just like on the series and all of the characters are just as I remember.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
Retribution goes awry when Jarod inadvertently kills a man. (Story in English)
Honey you need to update more often but Imma let you slide cos you still get shit done and you do it better and faster than many others, creators included. I fucking love your fics. All of them! Keep it dark and keep writing. Uhh God. MORE! Your characterisations & dialogue kick serious ass!
Well thank you, Monica_Bitch.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
OMG! My heart just...wow God wow! You write really really well. Really really! I love this story so much.. is the ending I want. It is my ending to the series now. I see the trees and Jarod's face when he sees her. I have tears all ovor m face. Beautiful and amazing.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
Parker corners Jarod. Or does she?
Still no sequel to this? Comeon.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
When Jarod and his clone are presumed dead and further cloning attempts prove futile, Raines is determined to find another way. He finds it in Dry River, Arizona.
Keeps getting better and better. I like that they are communicating and that even though you have that Jarod thing you don't constantly have him emasculated. Can't rate it anything but a ten. I give you more if I could. Love your work.
Hi, and thank you for reading and reviewing, Monica_Bitch. Miss Parker does emasculate him occasionally (I wouldn't dare).Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides.
Ooohh! Favorite quotes.....
"grapefruit-stoic and flushed pink-"
"The world continued to seem rather illusory, grainy and sepia-filtered; he felt as if he'd stepped out of his body, fallen into the gray, into some twisting penumbral state of consciousness."
Your writing style is so perfect. Steve and Craig should hire you...like now. Don't leave me waiting too long!
I'll try to update soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Monica_Bitch.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
I didn't see any typos so shut up about that and write some more for us. This is like watching the Pretender on tv again. It's coming home and seeing old friends and I can SEE the characters and I recognize them. I freaking LOVE your writing. Keep going and going. Hurry.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
Finally, all the answers they'd been looking for...
Your story was interesting. I like it.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
ok first up! That intro was amazeballs rockn. You know how to open and close a paragraph in a way that pulls us in and then boom the quick release. I love it. Cate's feelings ei the way children have to play and her fears you nailed them. I love the way she connected with Julian and wow you included every character in this.
Emily on the ground kissing the earth after Jarod's driving...man I rolled in the floor laughing. I love the snapshot of Emily and Ethan and her thoughts and feelings and "they're going to break in the new bed" lol. How cool that Jarod's parents still have sex! The FBI..yeah, we all know. The "director" redeemed himself yesterday but too late for me. I think you and me are the same team. You have a broad world view and are really open minded.
Another thing is I like how Jarod slips away inside himself to an unreachable place. I love how plausible this is, how Broots wouldn't give away anything intentionally but Jarod would still figure it all out, but only because of Angelo...where is Angelo? Anyway. Give them a happy ending girl. You know you should. I love this and everything you write. You keep me coming here you are my favorite author. If only you'd been a part of team Rebirth...I love your direction so much more. You can write longer chapters if you want.
You've inspired me to write. I'm working up the courage to post. Fingers crossed 4 me.
Yes, indeed, write, and do share with us. Please. It's lonely here in 'Most Recent' all by myself. My fingers are crossed for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Monica_Bitch.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
So cool how Jarod doesn't always get sarcasm.. his mother's in this chapter. Lol. Poor guy.
Now Miss Parker is going to take Jarod back to bed with her anyway? You left us hanging there?! Oh, why? I could go for some good smut and no can write it like you. Please soon. They need to get it on.
Loved it so far. I want more! Hurry.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
Why did you stop writing this? I want more. It's perfect!Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
My only complaint is that I had to go back to chapter 1 of part V. I wanted 2 tho so it's cool and I won't hold it against you. Tell you what girlfriend I appreciate you for showing Jarod's parents still having sex at their age. NOt many stories where the older folks get to have sex and this is so freaking cool. I love Emily for calling it like that. it's such a pleasure to read fresh ideas.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
"No one is going to break anything" Jarod said to his mother ... I read the new chapter first and then went back and saw that. Foreshadowing. He's afraid he'll break Miss P. Ahhhh Mirage I love this.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed
"Parker smiled, yawned, observed him through a veil of eyelashes. "Mm, I haven't seen that expression on a man's face in ages. I'm legal," she reminded with a chuckle. "You don't have to look so worried." "I don't?" "You do realize that I've had sex before?" "Not with me you haven't," he reminded softly- as if she needed to be reminded" And then this ""my technique is guaranteed to melt the tension. If you'll just disrobe and lie on the bed-" "Your technique is guaranteed to get you laid. I'm twice as persuasive when I'm naked." "I'm a professional." "Aren't we all," she quipped. "Trust me," he said. "I've done this before." "Mm, not with me you haven't."
LOVE! I love this series.
Can you let Miss Parker kill the bad asshole. I hate people like Whitman.Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed