Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2921
Read Count: 4601
Hi
LMAO that was soooo good.
You tricked me though!!!
Half way through that I was fully expecting the neighbour to be Jarod.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you :) Yes, a lot of people seem to think Jarod would be the annoying neighbor instead of the creepo in the gold shirt. But I think his stalkery habits are bad enough as they are without me making it worse so I thought it would be nice if he, for once, fixed Parker's problems, not be the cause of them
yay rachell it looks great, the colour really makes it impressive, and i just love the U2 version of that song too, great first chapter.
Author's Response: I never could have done the color without you Jacs! I owe you. :)
Damn those cookies!!! You sure that Mrs Finnegan (suspiciously like Fenigor) isn't really a Centre spy, or an Agent of this nefarious Zero thing???
Author's Response:
You know several people have mentioned that to me, honestly the thought never crossed my mind, but definately a possibility for the future..hehehe
Ohh chapter 3 most intriguing.
Why haven't i found this sooner ????
Pressing on now.
Author's Response: probably because i gave it the worst name and description as possible
Oh this is so good, no time to stop and reveiw....lol..
gotta say though i usally hate original other pretender characters, but so far i am liking this Lysander of yours.
the story is quick and pacy....
rushing forward to next chap now
This is just so good, i am just loving the fast pace, yet somehow don't feel like missing any details.
I love and hate the flipping around, just when you get into Jarod, switch to Lys, but you want both stories at the same time...lol....
Oh this is just so intense, I am loving it!!!!
Reviewer: jaccione SignedOhh you go Jarod. Paperclip to the rescue!!!!
Author's Response: not my style.. i like planting the seed of hope and tthen STOMPING on it.. hehehe
Ohh I don't want to like Henrik, but i do. He is going to wreck Jarod's hope and yet i have much empathy for him too....
onwards ownwards
Ohh to leave it there, dangling liek that, you are more evil with each chapter.
Author's Response:
hahaha get used to it.. i can't help myself anymore
only 10 more chapters to go! YAY!
Reviewer: jaccione SignedOhh no, this is a total disaster, you can't have them caught now. And it is 345am and i promised myself this would be last chapter, but i cant sleep leaving it there.
Author's Response: hehehe, i'm LOVING the running commentary. You are seriously making my day (so what if it's barely hours old). You cannot stop now! You are almost there
505am i finally finished it. And this last chapter, you dashed all my hopes. The title.... bad you, but al least the Major survived and their is hope for Parker's soul yet.
This was one of the best reads i have had in a long time. thanks
Author's Response: Wow! 5 am, you are a tropper. I'm so happy that you enjoyed yourself.. and that you fell for my evil last chapter title, despite the fact you had already started reading the sequel. Have a good sleep, you definately deserve it. hehehe
Using supa-admin-powa to edit here
in my defence, it is 5am, havent slept and eyes not working properly. Going to have to re read sequal cos am buggered if i can remember what happened now. So no surprise i got tricked...lol
Author's Response: hahaha.. we'll i'm glad you got tricked.. i was hoping i could still get to be at least a little bit evil!
Very good indeed
Author's Response: Now that we have the CSS corrected, you actually have to go back and read the fic (when you have the time of course). New method to fanfiction reviewing: review first, read later.
Testing reveiw as admin to see if the email to author response is now working after i found a fix for it
(no i am not trying to pad my own reveiws...lmao)
Author's Response: Hopefully if this is fixed, you will get an email to say the author has responded to one of your reveiws.
Author's Response: YAY it is fixed!!!!!!!
you should now be able to get an email to say your reveiw has been responded to.
LMAO, and that folks, was the ad break, back to the story right after those important messages.
Thanks to Kat to taking that commercial break for us, it was an honour to have you.
Author's Response: Damn the commercials, but at least this way it was fun
Is review email working?
Author's Response: It is now!!!
k just checking new smtp settings see if this works
Author's Response: so far looking pretty good
testing new settings again
Author's Response: all working yay
LMAO, i think you managed to get by. I have complete faith in your abilities to keep the site afloat and not break the script.
Have fun while we are gone, we certainly will and yay you on your guest appearance.
Author's Response:
Oh I'm sure everything will go just *something in the background makes smashing noise* ...fine. Have fun on your vacation!
Reviewer: jacci Signed Jarod's a prisoner of The Triumvirate. This is the sequel to Conflict Zero.
Stupid me did not heed warnings about reading first part first, but I will now. This was good and now i need to read the first one.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review :D. i'm glad you enjoyed.. good luck getting caught up with story 1.. it got a little long.. it ran away from me so to speak.. hehehe
I am almost scared to read any further. I really like how you have dealt with Parker's turning point. Far too often it is too rushed and completely implausabe, but this was very well done.
And i like the insight into the 'battle for Jarod'. He would never be broken through brute force alone. I hope he hangs on to the bitter end.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comments about Parker. I tried really hard not to make her 'cave' to easily.. and she still hasn't really. Will try to get the next one out ASAP! Thanks for reading :D
Reviewer: jaccione SignedI liked your Sydney in this and Miss Parker too. Good to see they taking it a bit easier on poor Lys.
What really worries me though is that line
“Bringing home his genius ass is the only way I can repay him.”
The day Jarod could be grateful for Parker bringing him 'home' is the day we know he is truly broken.
Author's Response: Thanks Jacci!! It won't be easier for Lys for much longer.. hehehe