Penname: jacci [Contact]

Real name: Jacci

Member Since: 10/04/05

Membership status: Administrator

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Hi



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Affiliation: Pretender

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Retired
Summary:

FINALLY COMPLETED. A saga with lots of action, plot twists, and a little romance thrown in from time to time. It's Jarod and Miss Parker's journey together toward the truth and the end.



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 105340
Read Count: 312071
[Report This] Published: 07/10/05 Updated: 30/06/07


Title: Chapter 1: Invincible

test reveiw, let me know if this email works

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 21/06/07
BLOOD by Miss Nathou Love
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Blood can be the reflection of someone's existence...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 467
Read Count: 393
[Report This] Published: 23/10/05 Updated: 23/10/05


Title: Chapter 1: blood

Sorry for contacting you in this way. Emails to you from Missing Pieces are not getting through. Due to companies going to war with spamming, many legitimate emails are now being blocked. Could you please add both jacci@pretendercentre.com and jacci.o@optusnet.com.au to your safe senders list, so that hopefully your reveiw notifications will get to you. If you could reply to this reveiw to let me know if you have done that, so then i can delete tihs.

thanks, and sorry for the hassle,
jacci 

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 28/06/07
Retired
Soul Splinters by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary: jarod.jpgWhat it takes to heal...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63775
Read Count: 78858
[Report This] Published: 23/11/05 Updated: 21/05/07


Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings...

Ohh nice start. I LOVE your Lyle hee hee, what a bastard!!!

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/03/07
Title: Chapter 3: Discoveries

Ohhh how nasty is this Lyle, it is delicious!!!

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 16/03/07
Title: Chapter 15: Escape

That was an intense ride and i hope Alex really is dead this time and Lyle finally gets exactly what he deserves!!!

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 31/05/07
Summary:

A sweet, fun short story for Christmas time based on my own Christmas distasters.



Categories: Jarod/ Miss Parker
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5890
Read Count: 14706
[Report This] Published: 06/12/05 Updated: 14/05/07


Title: Chapter 1: I

that was so good :D

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 12/06/07
Son of Adam by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Raines1.jpgCan one event change a life?

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54867
Read Count: 82385
[Report This] Published: 26/02/06 Updated: 21/05/07


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was verry good, liked it very much and glad Cox got exactly what he deserved, that bastard!!! Loved the depth of the Centre scheming too.

 Now to decide which fic next???? 

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 06/07/08
Soul Splinters II by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary: J2.jpgThis is a sequel to Soul Splinters.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55671
Read Count: 65843
[Report This] Published: 09/03/06 Updated: 05/07/07


Title: Chapter 16: Fading light

Read this one through all in one big hit. How much worse can it get? I feel like smacking Jarod for being such a fool, he soooo should have killed Lyle, Sydney would have helped him deal with it in therapy... lol.

More soon please!!!!

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Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 03/06/07
Title: Chapter 17: To be free

Oh no! That is a good AND bad ending. Sort of can't make up my mind whether or not it is good or bad. It made me sniffers though.

Great story, I really loved it, all the way through!!

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 05/07/07
Graveyard of Misery by icd
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Lyle-centric and pretty dark. Rated NC 18 - might be exaggerated but not sure; just to be on the safe side

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Lyle, Other Centre Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 798
Read Count: 425
[Report This] Published: 10/04/06 Updated: 10/04/06


Title: Chapter 1: Graveyard of Misery

I liked it very much too, I loved the subtle nuances you conveyed, it was very evocative, very well done.

Author's Response: *bows* thanks a lot. I was going for subtle, glad to hear it worked out :)

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/04/06
Pas de Deux by icd
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: uhm... dinner and what comes after

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 763
Read Count: 749
[Report This] Published: 20/05/06 Updated: 20/05/06


Title: Chapter 1: Pas de Deux

Ohhh.... I sooooo liked that. But you tricked me, I thought it was Jarod at first. That Mr Lyle is a very bad man, but oohh so delicioously so. Seductively written as well, very smooth.

Author's Response: Oh, yay. That was my initial intention to have it come across as Jarod. Hadn't thought it worked out though - so even happier now. Glad you liked it. *bows*

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/05/06
Truth, Dare, Promise by icd
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Somewhere along the way, the motives had shifted...

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4670
Read Count: 1597
[Report This] Published: 03/07/06 Updated: 03/07/06


Title: Chapter 1: Truth, Dare, Promise

OMG ines, you are evil. That was just so good, i had to read it twice. That is without a doubt the most credible twincest i have ever read, completely compelling. I just loved it... and the end.....ohhhhh bad you....lol

Author's Response: Mmmm, why thank you. *smiles* glad it grabbed you like that and that you enjoyed it enough to read it twice.

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/06
A winter's tale by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 124]
Summary: stories/395/images/parkerjarod.jpg A love story...my way. ;-) Read and review please

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55206
Read Count: 171234
[Report This] Published: 05/08/06 Updated: 19/06/11


Title: Chapter 18: Maybe we both deserve more

wow!!! I was so not expecting that at all. I love Lyle the best in this, he is a sneaking lying despicable bastard.

Can't wait to see some of these mysteries answered (this is as bas as the show, just raising more and mroe questions lmao)

Very much looking forward to the next chapter and glad that I finally read it (after much.... encouragement, bad me for putting it off for so long). Was very much a pleasant surprise 

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 14/07/08
Title: Chapter 19: If they're real

ohh more and soon, that was very good, fast paced and gasping for more. what a place to leave a chapter, you are sadistic!!!

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 26/08/08
Title: Chapter 16: Despair

wow, that was really good and tense. Loved the descriptions in this chapter, very rich and evocative. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 01/12/08
Mile High Club by terri_tpfan
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Miss Parker catches up to Jarod and introduces him to something new. Last chapter is up, enjoy. smiles

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5591
Read Count: 7334
[Report This] Published: 14/09/06 Updated: 14/09/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know how much I love this story!!!!

Author's Response: lol! Thanks for the reveiw jacci, and ditto for your stories

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 26/03/07
Summary: Jarod's first time at surfing. Just a short, one chap fic. Hope you enjoy. Please R&R.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1567
Read Count: 1721
[Report This] Published: 14/09/06 Updated: 14/09/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I forgot how beautiful this story was written, it is just sumptuous.

Author's Response: Awww thanks jacci! I'm glad you like it, still lol

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 11/06/07
Repercussion by terri_tpfan
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary: Jarod is back in the Centre... what will the repercussions be

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 30218
Read Count: 55103
[Report This] Published: 14/09/06 Updated: 22/02/08


Title: Chapter 4: Last time

I love this, so glad you started posting here now!!!

Author's Response: thanks jacci lol, and i did promise a day or two, but i complety forgot again lol

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 07/12/07
Summary: Jarod gets a nasty cold. Repsonse to Sleepyhead Challenge

Categories: Challenges
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: Sleepyhead Challenge
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 953
Read Count: 2099
[Report This] Published: 16/09/06 Updated: 16/09/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story Arls, in future I think you can write all mine for me.

Author's Response:

Thanks Jacs but you know that I could never have done it without you!!!

Hugs~Arls

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 29/01/07
Summary: If you had one day to spend with someone you love who is dead, who would it be?


Categories: Challenges
Characters: Catherine Parker, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Other Centre Character, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1508
Read Count: 2284
[Report This] Published: 24/09/06 Updated: 24/09/06


Title: Chapter 1: If You Had One Day....

Review number 2: Forgot what i said in the first one before the server ate it. I really liked this, i especially liked how MP turned it around on Jarod.

It isn't often i will side with MP over J, but on this one I think I might just have to.

Although of course, if you do poor J's thoughts.....


Author's Response: LOL! Thanks Jacs! Nice to know you can side with MP from time to time!

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/09/06
Summary:

Miss Parker thinks back.



Categories: Colours
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #59 Colours

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 111
Read Count: 1788
[Report This] Published: 02/10/06 Updated: 02/10/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhh that is soooo good, I really liked it

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/06
Summary: Broots' thoughts as he tucks his daughter in.


Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Broots, Debbie
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 198
Read Count: 2938
[Report This] Published: 09/10/06 Updated: 09/10/06


Title: Chapter 1: A Fathers Prayer

Ohhh that was so lovely.
All the things he sees, he has done, been forced to do. How hard it must be for him to reconcile that when he watches his little girl.


Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yes, that was what I was thinking too. He may be our nervous little tech, but first and foremost he's a father

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/03/07
False hope by Manoline
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Jarod's thoughts about hope.


Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 154
Read Count: 2024
[Report This] Published: 06/11/06 Updated: 06/11/06


Title: Chapter 1: False hope

That was very pretty and poingant, and so very true, made me think.

Author's Response: aw, thanks Jacs :)

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/01/07
A Choice by Manoline
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: We all wish for freedom, the question is how far are we willing to go to get it?

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 198
Read Count: 3522
[Report This] Published: 24/11/06 Updated: 24/11/06


Title: Chapter 1: A choice

Oh, that is so poignant. I really like the sense of struggle and what... maybe futility?

Nicely done


Author's Response:

Futility is definitely a good way to describe the mood I was trying to set. He's stuck in a pit of desperation, so he does something drastic, but when we do things out of desperation it's often not such a good idea as we thought it was..so yes, good word. And thank you for your lovely review :)

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/01/07
Friends by Manoline
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: To all the things you wish you said but never did.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Challenges: Drabble #05 Trust

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 921
Read Count: 2124
[Report This] Published: 20/12/06 Updated: 20/12/06


Title: Chapter 1: Friends

Oh that was so sad and so beautiful, it made me cry.
Sniffers, bad you :d



Author's Response:

Aw, poor Jacs. (yay me ^^ )

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 13/03/07