Penname: Tintinrulz [Contact]

Real name: Christian Jaeschke

Member Since: 16/12/13

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm a long-time Aussie Pretender fan.




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Reviews by Tintinrulz


Summary:

For the #CentreXmas challenge: Miss Parker goes Christmas tree shopping.



Categories: Christmas Challenge
Characters: Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 999
Read Count: 2039
[Report This] Published: 09/12/13 Updated: 09/12/13


Title: Chapter 1: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas, Miss Parker

Oops. I forgot to review this story. Here goes. I enjoyed it. The story was well-written and the Madeline character grew on me throughout. Good work, Dani. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Tintinrulz Signed
Date: 16/12/13
The Exchange by MarieL
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Two lonely little boys reach out to each other.



Categories: Christmas Challenge
Characters: Angelo, Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 999
Read Count: 1823
[Report This] Published: 11/12/13 Updated: 11/12/13


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Marie, you are a wordsmith. I love the unique and cleverly-written voice you've given to the story. It has so much character. I'm very happy you wrote about Angelo and Jarod's friendship, that's always been a highlight for me. A real treat. Keep up the excellent work!

I don't know how the rating system works, but I'm giving you top marks.

 

Reviewer: Tintinrulz Signed
Date: 16/12/13
Mistletoe by TheRockerbabe
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

It's the first Christmas without her father and Miss Parker is relunctant to celebrate...until Jarod brings the holiday spirit to her. 

 

 



Categories: Christmas Challenge
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1000
Read Count: 2562
[Report This] Published: 11/12/13 Updated: 11/12/13


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the story. It was well-written. Sydney has always been favourite of mine. I feel like the romance is far too much, too soon to be realistic. That said, I'm not a shipper so my opinion doesn't hold much water in the world of Pretender-related romance and that's okay. :)

Reviewer: Tintinrulz Signed
Date: 16/12/13
Summary:

Jarod summons Miss Parker and Sydney to Debbie’s school Christmas show.



Categories: Christmas Challenge, Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Debbie, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 999
Read Count: 2300
[Report This] Published: 12/12/13 Updated: 12/12/13


Title: Chapter 1: Parker the Red-Nosed Reindeer

The story was awkward, completely ridiculous and very unlikely to happen but it was well-written and I enjoyed it (except for the shipping). Perhaps you could have left out the bit about a naked Miss Parker, as it didn't seem to flow with the rest of the story. Otherwise, another interesting cross-over adventure in the vein of Christmas George and Cold Dick.

 



Author's Response:

Well I was pretty sure that a non-shipper wouldn't really enjoy the story. And of course it's unlikely to happen, it's Christmas, and everything is possible :)

And actually I thought that thing about Broots' thoughts of Miss Parker was the strongest line in the story. I added it at the end, ah ah!

Thanks for your review tintin!

Miss Roxy

Reviewer: Tintinrulz Signed
Date: 16/12/13
Retired
Summary:

A little bed time story for the twins



Categories: Christmas Challenge, Award Winner
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 997
Read Count: 2601
[Report This] Published: 15/12/13 Updated: 15/12/13


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I found this beautiful story to be a beautiful reminder of family and friendship. It was well-written, save for a few minor errors. Jarod's first exposure to Christmas presents was very touching. Good job!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I apologize for the errors, my english isn't perfect, but it's getting better thanks to the Pretender family and all the discussions in english.

Reviewer: Tintinrulz Signed
Date: 16/12/13