I'm a long-time Aussie Pretender fan.
For the #CentreXmas challenge: Miss Parker goes Christmas tree shopping.
Oops. I forgot to review this story. Here goes. I enjoyed it. The story was well-written and the Madeline character grew on me throughout. Good work, Dani. Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Tintinrulz SignedTwo lonely little boys reach out to each other.
Marie, you are a wordsmith. I love the unique and cleverly-written voice you've given to the story. It has so much character. I'm very happy you wrote about Angelo and Jarod's friendship, that's always been a highlight for me. A real treat. Keep up the excellent work!
I don't know how the rating system works, but I'm giving you top marks.
Reviewer: Tintinrulz Signed
It's the first Christmas without her father and Miss Parker is relunctant to celebrate...until Jarod brings the holiday spirit to her.
I enjoyed the story. It was well-written. Sydney has always been favourite of mine. I feel like the romance is far too much, too soon to be realistic. That said, I'm not a shipper so my opinion doesn't hold much water in the world of Pretender-related romance and that's okay. :)
Reviewer: Tintinrulz SignedJarod summons Miss Parker and Sydney to Debbie’s school Christmas show.
The story was awkward, completely ridiculous and very unlikely to happen but it was well-written and I enjoyed it (except for the shipping). Perhaps you could have left out the bit about a naked Miss Parker, as it didn't seem to flow with the rest of the story. Otherwise, another interesting cross-over adventure in the vein of Christmas George and Cold Dick.
Well I was pretty sure that a non-shipper wouldn't really enjoy the story. And of course it's unlikely to happen, it's Christmas, and everything is possible :)
And actually I thought that thing about Broots' thoughts of Miss Parker was the strongest line in the story. I added it at the end, ah ah!
Thanks for your review tintin!
Miss Roxy
Reviewer: Tintinrulz Signed
A little bed time story for the twins
I found this beautiful story to be a beautiful reminder of family and friendship. It was well-written, save for a few minor errors. Jarod's first exposure to Christmas presents was very touching. Good job!
Thank you very much! I apologize for the errors, my english isn't perfect, but it's getting better thanks to the Pretender family and all the discussions in english.
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