Chapter 1: Parker the Red-Nosed Reindeer
The story was awkward, completely ridiculous and very unlikely to happen but it was well-written and I enjoyed it (except for the shipping). Perhaps you could have left out the bit about a naked Miss Parker, as it didn't seem to flow with the rest of the story. Otherwise, another interesting cross-over adventure in the vein of Christmas George and Cold Dick.
Well I was pretty sure that a non-shipper wouldn't really enjoy the story. And of course it's unlikely to happen, it's Christmas, and everything is possible :)
And actually I thought that thing about Broots' thoughts of Miss Parker was the strongest line in the story. I added it at the end, ah ah!
Thanks for your review tintin!
Reviewer: Tintinrulz Signed