Penname: Jen [Contact]

Real name: Jen

Member Since: 21/11/13

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Huge fan of the old Pretender.




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Forces of Nature by Mirage
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 362]
Summary:

Nothing is more hideous than human nature.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Ethan, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 95072
Read Count: 101146
[Report This] Published: 08/11/08 Updated: 27/09/10


Title: Chapter 15: Letting Go

Ooh drunk Parker. I can't get enough.

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Date: 02/04/20
Title: Chapter 16: The Long Road Ahead

Oohhh wow what Sydney did to Parker... totally shrinking her. "You just did." Urgh Mirage amazing.

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Date: 02/04/20
Title: Chapter 17: Revelations

I love how nothing went the way I thought it would.

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Date: 02/04/20
Title: Chapter 18: A Fire In The Dark

OMG I love the missing piece you gave us. Fits pretender perfect.

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Date: 03/04/20
Title: Chapter 19: Give And Take

Oh I love so much how Parker keeps Jarod guessing.. how you keep us all guessing. I want to thank you again for this REFUGE and I thank the people in charge of this website who gave you and all of these authors and readers a place of ...  REFUGE.

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Date: 03/04/20
Title: Chapter 20: The Best Laid Plans

awww I love this. Your text got large in places but I know you talk about glitches sometimes lol and it just makes me giggle when I do see glitches lol. Awesome chapter.

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Date: 03/04/20
Title: Chapter 21: Inside out. Upside down.

I can't stop seeing Sydney shrink them both and everything Jarod said to Sydney is true. True. Sad but true.

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Date: 03/04/20
Title: Chapter 22: Pretending

Yowza. Jarod so serious and scary.

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Date: 03/04/20
Title: Chapter 23: Fear

Ohhh the tension. How do you write that and capture them so perfectly like they were on the show? OMG. I need more.

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Date: 03/04/20
Title: Chapter 24: Oh, What a Tangled Web

and then this happens and oohhh

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Date: 03/04/20
Title: Chapter 25: Such Sweet Sorrow

my heart my heart you break it.

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Date: 03/04/20
Title: Chapter 26: Square One

Oh hh the mental image of Jarod licking his wounds... what can I say? I can't leave my room and .... I can dream.

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Date: 03/04/20
Title: Chapter 6: Sleeping With The Enemy ?

O. M. G. I'm reading this again. I think I'm like swirling around out here. Quarantine sucks! I love this story and I can't believe you aren't back yet.

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Date: 27/03/20
Title: Chapter 7: Hot Water

Ok so that was some damn hot water Mirage.

I think Jarod knows that she suspects him of something now but he's messing with her to see how far she's gonna let him go and she doesn't have a choice because he's dangerous and this is coercion and I like how you detail that because some people wouldn't call it rape. It IS rape tho. Right?

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Date: 27/03/20
Title: Chapter 8: What Lies Beneath

We've seen Parker psyche people out like that before. Ohhh this is all plausible and they're the characters I remember from tv.... I'm also watching the pretender now while reading you. You're amazing.

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Date: 27/03/20
Title: Chapter 9: Into The Night

Jinkies. Mirage, this is horrifying.

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Date: 27/03/20
Title: Chapter 10: Clean Slate

Parker is so sweet to Sydney sometimes. Nailed the characters.

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Date: 27/03/20
Title: Chapter 11: Freedom?

I keep wanting Parker to stay free from him.. but I know how this ends already. I love this.

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Date: 27/03/20
Title: Chapter 12: Running In Circles

Miss Parker shooting the phone is the most Miss Parker thing eva.

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Date: 27/03/20
Title: Chapter 13: The Hardest Word

Uhhh I'm so addicted to your writing. 

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Date: 27/03/20
Title: Chapter 1: Stormfront

I stayed up literally reading all night and didn't review it all so I'm back to do that. The opening here is like watching any episode of The Pretender.. except IOTH and TP2001 both of which felt weird. This is like watching season 1 - 4 it's seems light and nice. Which makes what comes after so much horrific Mirage. You're an exceptional writer. Seriously I hope you're ok. I hope my emails got your attention too.

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Date: 22/03/20
Title: Chapter 2: The Twilight Zone

Ya I remember the first time reading and like yeah the twilight zone because she and Jarod are really alone together and he's in control but she doesn't know it yet.  This is my favorite horrific story of all time. It's fiction but ya it can totally happn.

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Date: 22/03/20
Title: Chapter 3: The Downward Spiral

So she's really starting to suspect him with the antibiotic and ... it's slowly building up and this is when I was like... ok what is up here? back when I first read this. THis hasn't aged at all. Relevant. Brilliantly written and executed.

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Date: 22/03/20
Title: Chapter 4: While You Were Sleeping

I remember my reaction was what the hell? in this chapter and I began thinking it was going to go dark. Boy was I right. Then she almost leaves the gun she demanded he give her ... because even she wants to trust him on some really basic level. Your work is always thought provoking and limit pushing. You're like the Quinton Taratino of writing.

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Date: 22/03/20
Title: Chapter 5: A Little Trust

Ahhhh I love the way Sydney snaps into action. He does on the show too.... will all of sudden be like "I'm done with this sh1t" so yah love it. Perfectiion.

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Date: 22/03/20