magnifique!

I'm just reading this and already am addicted. What happened to Parker? I hope she'll come through.

Please update this.

Author's Response:

I will. Soon. Thanks.

Oh Oh Mirage Mirage Mirage... am going to stay up all night reading. I've read only the first five chapters and your fics to me are like crack cocaine to addicts. You know the characters on fundamental plane.. are you sure you weren't a TP writer for the serie? In another life on a parrallel universe? I think Jarod would find himself feeling those emotion..his relationship with Miss Parker is "highly explosive". Plausible, original, always well written. Please I hope you will finish this because now I'm reading.

You make me hate Jarod for pounding at her walls until they fall. "He slipped out of bed and his dark, probing eyes narrowed. "Then why are you here with me?" And it's his fault she didn't leave. But it's her fault too because she did want him. You are amazing. Your muse is bold..she loves to make already complex characters even more complex to. I had a feeling he wasn't wearing a condom and I wondered....

My favorite chapter so far. So many brilliant parts. First I'm so glad that Ethan isn't groaning and acting whacky. I love that he is the voice of reason and tries to negotiate. I love so much the conversation between sister and brother.. "I don't know." Ethan replied, and then dipped his head and raised a brow at the sight of his sister in such distress. "Why don't you tell me how complicated this is?"Parker buried her face in her hands and shook her head."Sister?""Parker? Are you all right?"He grimaced when his sister sobbed into her hands."Oh, Parker." He whispered."

I mean just wow. I love the scene between Jarod and Astra too. You climbed into everyone's head and I could hear them, a little girl, Jarod, Ethan, Parker, all of them carrying on these conversations is like being there and being real.I love NEMO. I love Radney Foster song you used in the club where Ethan found Jarod. Top notch Mirage!

I spotted one spelling error typo.. " a crouch near the desk " think you meant couch or sofa but your stories are so great I laugh everytime I spot one thinking of you making fun of yourself. Must have sleep now.

Short and sweet. I didn't know this one and missed it. It's beautiful.

Top notch Pretender caliber quality writing and characterisations as always. You really know how to flesh out the characters and dialog so we can SEE in our mind what is transpiring. You ARE a writer, m'dear, the best Pretender writer bar none. This story is what I'd love to have seen Craig Van Sickle and Steven Long Mitchell do with the series. Thanks for your constant continuity and consistently amazing story telling abilities. I can't rate it anything but a 10.

Jarod is always trying to do good by her. "YOU DO remember Ethan?" I always love your dialouge. This is like watching the series on tv again. I don't have to miss the show and I get new scenes thanks to you. Thank you for sharing your talents and skills with us.

I echo everyone else with this... You are a genius. The one I come to read as other reviewers say the only one of substance. You know Miss Parker and all the characters on a personal way. You should be a Pretender writer. Thank you for keeping the fandom alive also by taking the time to read and review others.

Jarod's married? That took me a moment to get over and I have to say I'm not happy about it but the characters are in character and I love the plot. I want more.

Please never stop writing... I love this serie and want more.