Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Vignette
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 938
Read Count: 4107
23 year old fan of the best show EVER!
Good job. I thought it was well written and sweet.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedThat was really swseet. I like the story very much.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedThis is so sad. I like it very much.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedThat was really good. I like your stories.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedI really love this story! It's something Jarod would have done for Miss Parker in the serie if he felt any kind of love at all for her. They were always JUST friends until the Isle. It should have been this way!
Reviewer: Christoph SignedThis is really good. No update? Please keep going.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedThis was really great. I like the plot and interactions. I would be interested in reading more.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedOh I love it. I like how you have them doing normal things and ...being in love and togehter.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedI think the second is the same as first? I love it. Jarod is so sweet to help her.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedSuch short amazing chapters. I do hope Jarod will be ok.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedThe quote sounded perfect to me. You got it right.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedOh! I'm so glad there is another part to this. The suspence is so hard.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedI like how it isn't awkward at all for them to all be together. It's really good.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedWow that took a turn with Jarod's arrival. ;)
Reviewer: Christoph SignedAw so many shippery feels here. Melanie. Jarod Jarod Jarod.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedThis takes me right back, this same old conundrum, their circumstances. I really enjoy this.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedUh.... they got some explaining to do.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedAn abrupt end but a happy end and I'm happy about that. Thank you for sharing these stories with us..
Reviewer: Christoph SignedRetribution goes awry when Jarod inadvertently kills a man. (Story in English)
Thank you! Jarod is free for now and I hope he will stay so. I love how real everything is and the characters are as I remember them too! This was so action packed I almost fell off the edge of my seat!! Oooh Mirage! It's like being home to read you. What a way for Cox to die and that was bitching the way Jarod killed with his bare hands! He's going to be so sorrry later isn't he? He doesn't know that Luc died. Ohhh. So sad. Please post more.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedOoh. ooh! Mirage! OmG! This is horrific and wow... one of yours I never read but now I feel I must. I feel sorry for Jarod but I think he did right thing. He didn't mean to do the right thing but jail wouldn't have held the guy long anyway. That so scene with the gators is...felt like I couldn't breathe. I've read this six times over and over and over. You are good girl.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedThis was just like a script...I've done script reading and it was just like the series cutting in and out wwith key scenes. I love this chapter, how Miss Parker really searches the room and feels beneath things. The dialogue in this blows me away. There are no leaps of logic pulled out of the air. The characters explain what they doing, and how. THey explain why, and from there, we see how they move forward with reasonable explanations. Thank you for that!
Reviewer: Christoph SignedWhat an amazingly well written and hauntingly beautiful scene this was. My fav is 'Several panes of glass were missing from windows and the architecturally unsound structure was blanketed with spider webs- quite a few eight legged occupants were moving about freely, spinning silk as they placed bets as to where the errant moths circling the bare light bulb above the door might fall. Hunters. They were hunters.'
OMG. Who even bothers to paint that kind of beauty anymore and it transitions into Sydney being a hunter leading in to Jarod. Stunning work. The tears becomign laughter....Jarod's about to snap and you give us a clear painting of that. No one illustrates their words like you can. It's really amazing. I'm in awe.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedOH God! Why does she have to be so persistant. But she is and that's what we loved about her on the series and she's been in trouble before for defying Jarod. But it's her Jarod to find him. And she doesn't take orders from him. The part where he says "I have the gun" and then suddenly realizes he has two guns "two guns" ....he's really nuts.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedMy Latin is rusty. I'm glad you didn't write the whole thing in Latin. That's my only complaint...and that the chapters are so short. Ohhh MIss Parker. "What about what I need. Have you ever stopped to consider that?" What's telling is they both have this internal dialogue going on that is putting them down andit's like they are each other's inner voice or something...a darker voice. It's wild. I never thought that Raines woud want to insure his actions and had Jarod do a simulation about Catherine's death but that makes sense. Rainesis a coward and he wouldn't want any blacklash. These two. You write them so well and you talk about spiders and their webs but you weave the ultimate webs you spider you. I'm glad she didn't take the pretender too far. Wonderful work Mirage.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedI knew that Lyle woudl be persona non grata....and maybe Cox too. Twice as much terror lol. This exam was so dauting and just so...medically accurate but we know that it's as much about taking control from Jarod too. I shiver at this Mirage. Cox. You got them all down, all the characters to a big T, you know them all so welll. It's like watching the series when I read you. Seeing Cox...he always scared me and it's really scary. Love that FYI at the end. We know you don't condone it. I feel so much for Jarod now and I always did but ...ohhh Mirage. You are so talented!
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