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Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4005
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Heyyy yeyy! You're back and better than ever and I can't get enough and always want more. Rich dialogue and pretender perfect characterizations and I love this story. More please??
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedHoney YAS! I love this. I'm soooo looking forward to Jarod telling Parker all of the deets. How the heck do ya come up with these? More now!
Have a boune natale, feliz navidad, happy festivus, blessed yule. I'm such a heathen lol.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedUh-huh love it ! Trying to be good and respect your wishes but I really want to share this on Twitter and other apps. I know how you feel tho and that you don't want the attention and I want the stories to keep coming so I'll behave . We only share you because we love you and your work so if someone does share you please don't be upset. please don't stop writing for us .
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedYummmm mmmm deliciously dark Jarod.
I love his explanation, just finishing what she started to...lol 🤣 it's so Jarod and gotta say I get tired of how real life baddies... like donnie former guy pussy grabber drumpf, keep getting away with everything!
Did u know that Michael T Weiss was actually in a movie with that son of a bitch???!!
Ughhhhjhjjj!!!
I love this update and story and wowwwew Jarod is HOME!! 🏠
FINALLY!!!
Sorry that life's being a bitch with your jaw thing and wisdom tooth problem and all
Do u need anything? I can send you anything, money or anything...let me know!
Be good to yourself
.. journey
try getting that song outta yo head. I gotta stop it with the 80s music kick I'm on.
love u take care 😘
Oh. I didn't know. I'm telling on myself here. I haven't watched all of the movies. Shame on me. There's so much I don't know.
No, I don't need anything at all.
Be good to yourself- right back atcha. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedFinished business.
Awesome! You should be the dark angel, what you do is more befitting this name! Beautifully done as always!
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedA last resort
Ohhh 😯 oh I love the plot, action, writing, all of it!!! Need more!
Thanks for the r&r, TheDarkAngel.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedWoot woot! More please?
Of course. Thanks for the r&r, TheDarkAngel
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedPlease keep going.
Thanks.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedI love that he still knows her so well and the character growth and oh my Goddesses all of it. More please 😘
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedAwesome awesome 😎😎!! I love your solid command of language, characters, writing in general. Those transitions are so smooth ! Congratulations! More please?
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedUhhh huh ohhhh my god that was so f**ing intense . You built that up beautifully and I didn't that coming at all. Neither did Jarod and Parker!!! She tried to detach and act disinterested but Jarod can be impactful!! Her voice straining under his impactfulbess ...ahhhhhhh mirage you're the best!
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel SignedThis scribblet follows Asphyxia.
Woot woot! Mirage is in DA house!
Dark and plausible, every word perfectly placed, every line suspenseful, always in character, so haunting. You are a wordsmith Mirage.
I detect hints to the Wizard of Oz. Might jus be me tho.
I love this darkness. It is The Pretender. It must be dark. You got it right.
Parker would seek the refuge of her Catherine. It's so bittersweet and heartwrenching.
Thank you so much for all of your brilliant contributions to this fandom. I love The Pretender, have always loved The Pretender and you capture the spirit, heart, soul, and mind of The Pretender so beautifully.
The Pretender never ended and it never will if you keep writing.
I love all of the fanfic authors and this website so much. Still alive. This can't ever die.
More more more !!
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