Penname: Haiza Tyri [Contact]

Real name: Christy

Member Since: 15/06/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm a 28-year-old student...wait, no, I'm not. I just graduated with a Master of Divinity, very sadly, because I love school. No, I'm still a student, just not formally.

Books, writing, theology, and psychology are among my passions. The Pretender draws me because of the depth of its psychological insights and questions. I have never seen a TV show that delves into psychological concepts as deeply as this one. Family, need, belonging, anger, hate, psychosis, love, Stockholm Syndrome, identity... Incredible.

I am a newcomer to The Pretender. I watched my first episode in the beginning of May 2009, and as of the middle of June 2009 I'm still working my way through Season 4. Though I'm a neophyte, as a writer, I have to write about what I love. I love The Pretender.

Right now I'm trying to write at least one drabble for each episode.



Affiliation: Pretender

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Reviews by Haiza Tyri


The Key by Eveylin
Rated: PG 13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: He's the key - for how long?

Categories: Jarod's Hair
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #16 Jarod's Hair

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 167
Read Count: 2026
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: The Key.

Great little moment. I liked it.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Summary: none

Categories: Jarod/Zoe or Miss Parker/Thomas
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #10 T/MP or J/Z Pairings

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 109
Read Count: 2021
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: ch1

Sadness. Lovely.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Her Eyes by jerseygirl
Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: lil Drabble

Categories: Miss Parker's Eyes
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #18 Miss Parker's Eyes

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 164
Read Count: 2201
[Report This] Published: 29/04/05 Updated: 29/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Her Eyes

Thomas did. I can almost imagine Jarod going from this little piece of contemplation to sending Thomas out to meet Miss Parker. Beautiful description of her eyes.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Food for Thought by Sezzie
Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Marshmallows...

Categories: Marshmallows
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #17 Marshmallows

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 104
Read Count: 1931
[Report This] Published: 10/05/05 Updated: 10/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Oh, delightful.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Ways of Dying by Melanie Anne
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Character death, lots of it.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Angelo, Jarod, Kyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Challenges: Drabble #24 Alternate Universe

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 582
Read Count: 2030
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Ways of Dying

I really like the first one.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Pointless to Try by Sezzie
Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: She should have known...

Categories: Dialogue Only
Characters: Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #35 Dialogue Only

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1293
Read Count: 2097
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

I love the last sentence.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Summary: Jarod encounters something that most Americans experience every six months: the dentist!

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2142
Read Count: 4982
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A New, Unpleasant Experience

I've been giggling madly. Oh, all that frightful junk food Jarod eats...

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Memory by Minttown1
Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: None given.

Categories: Jarod's Hair
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #16 Jarod's Hair

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 109
Read Count: 1951
[Report This] Published: 26/05/05 Updated: 26/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Oh, that's amazing. Well-done.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
The Memory by shipperchick
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: None given.

Categories: Miss Parker's Eyes
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #18 Miss Parker's Eyes

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 115
Read Count: 2655
[Report This] Published: 27/05/05 Updated: 27/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Oh, Miss Parker's death. Beautifully done.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Liberated by chopsticks
Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Looking in a mirror, you have to wonder if your image really your own, or are you sharing it with someone else?

Categories: Mirrors
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #45 Mirrors

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 167
Read Count: 1822
[Report This] Published: 18/08/05 Updated: 18/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Liberated

I read this once before and neglected to leave a review, and it has stuck in my mind ever since. Beautifully done.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Haunted by chopsticks
Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Their deaths would haunt him to his own.

Categories: Death
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Challenges: Drabble #47 Death and/or Socks

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 189
Read Count: 2276
[Report This] Published: 18/08/05 Updated: 18/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Haunted

Oh, beautifully angsty. I love it.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Socks by chopsticks
Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Things tend to remain hidden until a little cleaning is done.

Categories: Socks
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #47 Death and/or Socks

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 202
Read Count: 1660
[Report This] Published: 18/08/05 Updated: 18/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Socks

Lovely. And I like the anthropomorphication of the dryer.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Moment of silence by icd
Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Written for the 'Silence'-Challenge over at Pretender100; Wordcount: 100

Categories: Silence
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Challenges: Drabble #49 Silence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 114
Read Count: 1708
[Report This] Published: 19/10/05 Updated: 19/10/05


Title: Chapter 1: Moment of silence

Beautiful and beautifully written.

Author's Response: *bows* thanks a lot!

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Summary: stuck in a situation with little means of escape

Categories: Challenges
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: #3 10 Word Challenge

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 121
Read Count: 2392
[Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I vote Brigitte.

Author's Response: your guess is correct :)

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 18/06/09
Embodied Game by icd
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Written for the 'Black and White'-challenge on Pretender100;
word count: depends... the text alone 102 words - the directions would make 38 more


Categories: Black and White
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, General, Vignette
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #55 Black and White

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 144
Read Count: 2093
[Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Magnificent.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Daddy by Melanie Anne
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Response to the "Don't call me that" challenge.

Categories: "Don't call me..."
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #28 "Don't Call Me"

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 102
Read Count: 2248
[Report This] Published: 07/03/07 Updated: 07/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent. Most excellent.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Summary: written for teh *Air vents* challenge on pretender100

Categories: Air Vents
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #50 Air Vents

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99
Read Count: 1892
[Report This] Published: 07/03/07 Updated: 07/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Marvelous!

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Summary: written for the 'Black and/or while' challenge on pretender100


Categories: Black and White
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #55 Black and White

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 100
Read Count: 1991
[Report This] Published: 07/03/07 Updated: 07/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I love the black-white/grey analyses. Nicely done.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Firsts by 24
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Response to a challenge


Categories: Challenges
Characters: Broots, Debbie
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #11 Pre-Escape Character

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 153
Read Count: 2244
[Report This] Published: 06/04/07 Updated: 06/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, happy. I love Broots.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 17/06/09
Prodigy: Genesis by MP
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Birth of a genius.



Categories: Prequel
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: Prodigy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3038
Read Count: 2479
[Report This] Published: 09/11/07 Updated: 09/11/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well written, though the twin thing does give me pause. I thought Kyle was considerably younger than Jarod. Though they do look pretty close in age in the Centre flashbacks, in the "current day" parts there's a great deal of difference in their ages.

Fascinating idea, though, having it all kind of be Major Charles' fault.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 29/06/09
One Moment by Bucky LaFontaine
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Someone makes an observation regarding Jarod and Miss Parker

Categories: Character Musing, Season 3
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1091
Read Count: 2097
[Report This] Published: 26/11/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this musing analysis of Jarod.

This bit is truly splendid: "Hard when you expected softness, softness when you expected firmness, always covered quickly by a nod, a bowed head or a blink of an eye. They were halves of the same coin."

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 22/06/09
Prodigy: Family by MP
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: The second installment in the "Prodigy Series."  Separated at birth, Jarod and Kyle are now four years old.  How has Jarod adapted to growing up--a prodigy in a world that does not understand him?  How has Kyle survived life in the depths of the Centre?  What does the Centre have planned? 

Categories: Prequel
Characters: Jarod, Jarod's Family, Kyle, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Other Centre Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: Prodigy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6321
Read Count: 2196
[Report This] Published: 30/03/08 Updated: 30/03/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great glimpse into Raines’ mind, and I like seeing Sydney first through his eyes. Also neat getting to see things through Jacob's eyes. I like the contrast between him and Syd. 

Will there be more?

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 29/06/09
Summary: Revenge is a dish best served cold. MPJ

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Alex, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 3221
Read Count: 2713
[Report This] Published: 31/03/08 Updated: 31/03/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, interested in reading more. Nice job, bringing Alex back. No one ever really dies in The Pretender, after all.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 30/06/09
Summary:

An empty lair sends the gang into unfamiliar territory. The hunters turn game, while Jarod fights for what he thought he'd always have; His mind.



Categories: RPG
Characters: Alex, Broots, Cox, Emily, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 62992
Read Count: 203596
[Report This] Published: 22/05/08 Updated: 31/08/08


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Just finished chapter 10, and I'd just like to say that the bit about Jarod's room in his mind and his reprogramming of Lyle's reprogramming is brilliant. My favorite part of the whole story so far.

Also I love Sydney's characterization. 

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 02/07/09
Summary: This is a response to Thunderbird's third 10 words Challenge. Jarod has been captured...Multiple point of views.

Categories: Character Musing, Challenges
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None
Challenges: #3 10 Word Challenge

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 592
Read Count: 2457
[Report This] Published: 07/10/08 Updated: 07/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As always, it's marvelous. Jarod back in the Centre ties my stomach up in knots. You do it beautifully.

Author's Response: *bows* thank you very much, o faithful reviewer!!! This one was my first fic ever, and it's like a "middleman style 101", lol!

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed
Date: 18/06/09