Penname: RaChell [Contact]

Real name: wouldn't you like to know!

Member Since: 08/05/05

Membership status: Administrator

Bio:

The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.

Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.

Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.

 

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Found by 24
Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Jarod thinks that Miss Parker is dead, but what happens when he finds out the truth?

 

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Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1152
Read Count: 3391
[Report This] Published: 12/08/05 Updated: 26/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: Miss Parker

I agree with Thara, you must write a sequel 24.  There is so much more of this story just waiting to be written.

BTW Thara, you've been MIA recently and I know you have some stories to share.  :)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 27/04/07
Summary: After Island of the hunted. Things get a bit more interesting.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Baby Parker, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1067
Read Count: 4087
[Report This] Published: 13/08/05 Updated: 13/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Nice story!  But you just can't leave us hanging, there has to be more.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/04/07
Sweet Dreams by Jamison
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Miss Parker pays Jarod a visit after Zoey's death.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1349
Read Count: 1772
[Report This] Published: 14/08/05 Updated: 14/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Dreams

mp3.jpgWhat a delight it was to run across your story. This was so sweet and unexpected.  And for someone who doesn't like Zoey, (I'm a J/MP 'shipper) I have to admit I really felt sorry for her and Jarod.

I love the way you played the whole story out, the plot line was great, writing in first person made it so personal and you could see the angst that was being played out.

A sequel?  Yes, by all means you should!   

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
A Man or a Mouse by Jodi
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: This is pretty corny...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 429
Read Count: 2257
[Report This] Published: 14/08/05 Updated: 14/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Man or a Mouse

This is a hoot!  I nearly cried from laughing.  gotta love Broots.  Nicely done.  broots.jpg

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Summary: the title says it all.

Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 846
Read Count: 3340
[Report This] Published: 15/08/05 Updated: 15/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1

Cute story!  Like the way you have Sydney finding the note.  Nicely done.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/07
All We Have by Eveylin
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Truth, lies and her place in between.

Categories: Death
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #47 Death and/or Socks

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 185
Read Count: 2231
[Report This] Published: 18/08/05 Updated: 18/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: All We Have

Love it.  Very nice and well done.  BTW if this is what inspires you, then you should attend those lectures more often.  ;)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Summary: Jarod discovers . . . Bubble Wrap!

Categories: During The Series
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 743
Read Count: 1646
[Report This] Published: 23/08/05 Updated: 23/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is adorble!  I love it!  So cute and so Jarod.  Perfect and so anoying, you can almost hear the damn bubble wrap popping!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/07
A Father's Words by Jaxie
Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A Yahoo! Groups challenge response to Cas' envelope challenge: Jarod receives an envelope from his father.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 891
Read Count: 4231
[Report This] Published: 23/08/05 Updated: 23/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nicely done, you wroite very well and one can almost hear Major Charles' voice and see Jarod crying.  Very well done!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/05/07
Summary: What if Jarod was in charge of 'The Weakest Link?' Dedicated to all my Pretender Loons!

Categories: During The Series
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 819
Read Count: 3996
[Report This] Published: 23/08/05 Updated: 23/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL!  This is cute. What a funny dream.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/07
Summary: The hunt and Halloween

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26887
Read Count: 2176
[Report This] Published: 26/08/05 Updated: 26/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Firsthand Evidence

Great story!  So glad to read it again.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Surrender by Shannon
Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Surrender to win; Note: Written for Emily's Picture Challenge!

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 290
Read Count: 1723
[Report This] Published: 26/08/05 Updated: 26/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Surrender

pretend2.jpgExcellent story!  Perfect and delightful to read.  Love it! 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
A Week by StarBeam
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A couple of calls.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 735
Read Count: 2460
[Report This] Published: 28/08/05 Updated: 28/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Week

Wow!  What a interesting concept!  I really enjoyed this and you have such a unusal twist at the end!  I'm impressed with your plot and story line! 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/05/07
A Trace Of Red by Shaznay
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Just read!

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 764
Read Count: 2906
[Report This] Published: 28/08/05 Updated: 28/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Trace Of Red

Interesting story line, a bit dark but interesting none the less.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 17/05/07
Summary: A short little humor piece that I wrote for the NewsGroupies in alt.tv.pretender. Miss Parker finds something on television that makes her wonder about Lyle.

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 643
Read Count: 3847
[Report This] Published: 29/08/05 Updated: 29/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: 'I Wonder If He's Trying To Tell Me Something?'

This is a real gem.  It's so cute and funny and....OhMyGawd!  What if it's real??????

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Wrecking Ball by Sarah
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Something I wrote for a challenge on a fic list *g* It's a PWP of the worst kind *g*

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Brigitte, Broots, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Other Centre Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1341
Read Count: 2105
[Report This] Published: 29/08/05 Updated: 29/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Wrecking Ball

Very cute!  I needed a funny story or two tomake my day and this one did just that ..Thanks to your creative writing skills. 

Hot pink boxer shorts huh?  

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/04/07
Omissis by carha
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: When she met someone, she did not think that she had. (Miss Parker/Brigitte)

Categories: Prequel
Characters: Brigitte, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Slash

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1942
Read Count: 2167
[Report This] Published: 12/09/05 Updated: 12/09/05


Title: Chapter 1: Omissis

Quite a story!  Never would have pictured the two together but it is a intersting concept.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/07
Summary: Lyle reflects while staring into inevitability.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 655
Read Count: 1838
[Report This] Published: 20/09/05 Updated: 20/09/05


Title: Chapter 1: You Had a Gun (That You Used on Me)

Really wicked and well done!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/05/07
Retired
Summary:

FINALLY COMPLETED. A saga with lots of action, plot twists, and a little romance thrown in from time to time. It's Jarod and Miss Parker's journey together toward the truth and the end.



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 105340
Read Count: 317441
[Report This] Published: 07/10/05 Updated: 30/06/07


Title: Chapter 20: Things Change

Looking forward to more!  Anything coming soon?


Author's Response: This month will probably be slow as school is really really busy in these final weeks. I won't forget about it though don't you worry!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/04/07
Title: Chapter 44: Steam

The story really has picked up and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.  The only complaint I have is that you've surpassed MP's chapter quota of 20 chapters and It's a b*tch to have to scroll thru the previous 20 or so chapters to get to the most recent one.

Author's Response: There's a chapter quota? Good to know.. now. Haha oh well I guess. Too late now. Will remember for my next story I suppose. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/04/07
Title: Chapter 45: Circles

Oh the angst!  You write it so well.  Can't wait for the next installment of your story.

Author's Response: Thank you! Angst might be my favorite haha. And The Pretender has the greatest characters for angst.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/07
Title: Chapter 47: Lost in Trance

Nice, very nice!  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you dear. :D

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/05/07
Title: Chapter 48: Keys

Nice chapter!  Looking forward to the next.  Really enjoyed the brief Broots and Debbie interaction.  Very sweet.

Author's Response: And very relevant to the overall story. ;)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Title: Chapter 49: Closure

Ohh no you don't! This had better NOT be the end of this story! You can not just leave us hanging! You need to have one more chapter to finish it off. (Or else I'll have to use that sharp pointy stick on you.)

Now that rant is out of the way, great chapter, love the Miss Parker, you really have her down and you can see her blue eyes flash. Lyle of course just keeps coming back like a bad energizer bunny. Please tell me there is more to come!

BTW Morgan is my hero!  (big smile, love her review!)

"He can't die! Please don't let him die!

I need a new chapter! I really do! Like yesterday! (No presure here.)"

 



Author's Response: Put that pointy stick away! That's not the last chapter, I promise haha. I guess naming it "closure" was a bad idea? Thanks for reviewing. I love to see such emotional reactions haha, even if they're angry and directed to me. ;)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/06/07
Title: Chapter 1: Invincible

Author's Response: Put that pointy stick away! That's not the last chapter, I promise haha. I guess naming it "closure" was a bad idea? Thanks for reviewing. I love to see such emotional reactions haha, even if they're angry and directed to me. ;)

 That's not the end?  Oh good!  You had me worried there for a minute, now I can stop biting my nails. (Big sigh of relief!) But don't push it!  You know how impatient some of us readers can get and Morgan said it best:

"I need a new chapter! I really do! Like yesterday! (No presure here.)"

Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 20/06/07
Title: Chapter 50: Lesson Learned: The Epilogue

Perfect ending and yes I do believe there was a tear or two shed on my part! So well done and I love very bit of it. There are certain parts I really enjoyed but won't referr to since I don't want to spoil the ending for anyone who hasn't read it.

Excellant work, job well done. I'm looking forward to another one of your tales but please, don't take another 7 years to write it, OK?

 



Author's Response: Haha will try not to do that again. It would be awful if 14 years of my life was sucked up into only two stories. I'm glad you liked the ending. I think it's really different from the rest of the story so I was curious as to how it would be receieved. Thanks for all your reviews throughout!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/06/07