Penname: RaChell [Contact]

Real name: wouldn't you like to know!

Member Since: 08/05/05

Membership status: Administrator

Bio:

The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.

Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.

Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.

 

MP.jpg



Beta-reader: No
Affiliation: Centre

[Report This]
Reviews by RaChell


A Mistaken Identity by Ambrosia
Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: .... ohh it's hard to describe ..

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 488
Read Count: 3073
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1

LOL!  I always loved your stories and it's a delight to read them again.  Miss your writing Lady.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/01/07
Just Like Her by Ambrosia
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Broots has an interesting talk with his daughter, Debbie, over breakfast.

Categories: Season 2
Characters: Broots, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1051
Read Count: 2468
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Just Like Her

This one is so good! Love how true to character it is! A must read!

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/05
Two Cartridges and a Lyle by Ambrosia
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker has had enough, and she's gonna do something about it - Lyle lovers mightn't want to read this one ;o)



Categories: Season 3
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 516
Read Count: 2640
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Two Cartridges and a Lyle

So nice to re-read this story! I forgot what a sense of humour and daring could do to take a short story to a new level. I could picture Miss Parker doing something like this.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/05
10,000 Promises by icd
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Written for the 'Song Titles'-challenge on Pretender100; Wordcount: 100

Categories: Song Titles
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #02 Song Titles

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 115
Read Count: 3402
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: 10,000 Promises

Very touching and so sad.  Perfect story.

Author's Response: *bows* thanks

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Unexpected Visitors by icd
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Written for the 'Unexpected Visitor'-challenge on Pretender100. Unrelated to the other chapter; Wordcount: 107

Categories: Unexpected Visitors
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #39 Unexpected Visitor(s)

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 228
Read Count: 3842
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 2: Face to face with your gun

Intense and wonderful as usual.  So why am I always surprised when I stumble acorss these little hidden jewels of yours scattered thru the website?

Author's Response:

>So why am I always surprised when I stumble acorss these little hidden jewels of yours scattered thru the website? 

lol, yes, why? ;P 

No, really, glad you like it. Currently there's nothing new, because I haven't seen my muse in like... years. 

I have some faint ideas, but they just won't get down on paper *sighs*

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/07
War by icd
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Written for the 'War'-challenge on Pretender100. Unrelated to the second chapter; Wordcount: 101

Categories: War
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #37 War

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 225
Read Count: 4123
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 2: Similarities to a war

Very thought provoking.  Interesting comparassion of Jarod and Alex as being at war.  Never thought of it like that.

Author's Response: yay me then. glad you liked!

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/07
Raven Hair, Ruby Lips by gbarton
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod dreams of Miss Parker.

Categories: Song Titles
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Challenges: Drabble #02 Song Titles

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 458
Read Count: 734
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: none

Cute sorty Gena! Your writing is getting better and I like it!

Author's Response:

Thanks. I love you RaChell. :)

 

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/05
The Tortures of Gar by Ambrosia
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: This is a story about the Virtual Gar we played with at Snowy's Lounge Yahoo Club 'back in the day'. Ana would never let us play with him for long so I borrowed him for a little while. He came back in one piece though hehehe

First part was written by myself and the second was written by Sarah in response to it.

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Other Centre Character
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1379
Read Count: 2060
[Report This] Published: 24/04/05 Updated: 24/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: One and Only

How funny!  I remember Snowy's lounge.  ;)  But I never knew about this story.  Oh you shameless hussy you.  (blush, blush)

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/01/07
Sanctuary by M Rose
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker thinks about her "Sanctuary."



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1703
Read Count: 9034
[Report This] Published: 24/04/05 Updated: 24/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: none

Very nice and well done.  You write so well that the reader can picture Miss Parker in the cottage and see her deep in thought.  Great job!

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Breathing by Chris
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker comes home and gets lost in her thoughts about the sense of her life.

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 735
Read Count: 2757
[Report This] Published: 26/04/05 Updated: 26/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Very nicely written.  I would say this is sweet without being over done, a well excuted piece of writing. 

I have to agree with Jersygirl, they did kiss as children and yes, from their POV I do think it counts.  Afterall, the Centre doesn't let one stay a child for long and every bit of something 'special' would be treasured in that hell hole.  

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/02/07
Chocolate Test, The by Chris
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Sequel to "Damn 'puter"...

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 842
Read Count: 2486
[Report This] Published: 28/04/05 Updated: 28/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Cute!  Very funny!

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/05/07
I Will If You Will by Bracgirl
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: After a run in with her father, Miss Parker goes to a bar and Jarod follows her there.

Categories: Song Titles
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #02 Song Titles

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3241
Read Count: 2680
[Report This] Published: 29/04/05 Updated: 29/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice going!  I had no idea that you had written this.  Now when are you going to finish it?  A nice romantic ending with the Centre brought crashing to it's knees. Sydney and Broots freed from the tyrant (known as the Centre), free to pursue their own dreams.  You really need to write more.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/02/07
Saying Goodbye by Eveylin
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Five different ways of saying goodbye isn't necessarily five ways of saying I never loved you.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 330
Read Count: 1406
[Report This] Published: 30/04/05 Updated: 30/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Saying Goodbye.

Cute!  And so true! Relationships are a always a double edge sword. 

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Don't Say Goodbye by Felicity Drummond
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod has too choose, Miss Parker is too afraid to answer the phone and Sydney is ever the mediator.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney, Zoe
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2662
Read Count: 2545
[Report This] Published: 30/04/05 Updated: 30/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Don't Say Goodbye

Really liked this story.  I was in suspense thru the whole thing and I really liked the way you ended it. 

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/07
Shadows of the Past by Chris Fujioka
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: friends, family and hunters.....

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1944
Read Count: 1879
[Report This] Published: 01/05/05 Updated: 01/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Great story Chris!  Nice to re-read it.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
A Few Words About Ice Cream by Ginger
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Oh, I wouldn't even bother.



Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2736
Read Count: 18220
[Report This] Published: 04/05/05 Updated: 04/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Few Words About Ice Cream

LOL!  This is beyond cute!  I love it!  Now I'll never look at ice cream the same way again.  ;)

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/05/07
A Christmas Story by gbarton
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod dresses up as Santa and gets Miss Parker to help him pass out presents.

Categories: Seasons
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Challenges: Drabble #21 Seasons

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1852
Read Count: 1785
[Report This] Published: 08/05/05 Updated: 08/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: none

This was always a cute story!  :)th_JMP.jpg

Author's Response: Thank you. I finally got into this. LOL

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
A Breath of Fresh Air by Sezzie
Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Addictions can kill you...

Categories: Addictions
Characters: Mr Raines
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #32 Addictions

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 104
Read Count: 3230
[Report This] Published: 10/05/05 Updated: 10/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Breath of Fresh Air

Wonderful!  What a delightful story and you can almost smell the smoke and see Raines' glare.  Nicely done.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/07
Adieu by Sezzie
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: It's a kiss of goodbye...

Categories: Anything/Miscellaneous
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #04 Anything

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 108
Read Count: 2497
[Report This] Published: 10/05/05 Updated: 10/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Adieu

Really sad and moving.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/05/07
Entropy by jacci
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: What would happen if they really caught Jarod and escape eluded him?

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Cox, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43747
Read Count: 11395
[Report This] Published: 10/05/05 Updated: 11/05/05


Title: Chapter 9: 9

What a twisted ending!  I never would have guessed it.  Nicely done story and very tense and on the edge of your seat reading.  Good Job!broots.jpgBTW I love adding these pictures in the reviews, you've created a monster you know! 

Author's Response:

LMAO, i have noticed a 'few' pics popping up in the reveiws you leave... hee heee.

Glad to have surprised you with the ending. Felt that just once it would be nice if things went a little differently in a story.

 

\"jacci.jpg\" 

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Scripted by dancink
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: If only she had a script to follow. Written for Nyias as a part of Blademistress's lj Pretender ficathon.

Categories: Prequel
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 352
Read Count: 1781
[Report This] Published: 10/05/05 Updated: 10/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Scripted

LMAO!  This is too cute and funny.  Excuse me while I pick my self up from the floor and straigthen my chair.  Way to go!

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Madeline Series by Danielle SmileyFace
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A young girl is dumped in front of Miss Parker's house in the middle of winter. How will she affect Parker's life?

2010: Chapter 2 has been updated to include a missing chunk that was cut out in the original transfer here.  I'm sorry it took me so long to realize it!

2013: Ch 1&2 have been updated slightly.



Categories: Season 1, Season 2
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10149
Read Count: 5669
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 28/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Home

I remember being a big fan of this series when you were writing it. Loved the storyline.  Good to see it again. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks RaChell!  It's great to see a familiar face.  =)  I just watched all 4 seasons and both movies in less than a month and my Pretender obsession is back in full force... working on more Madeline as we speak.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Cooking with Madeline by Danielle SmileyFace
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Version One of the Madeline Series.  Madeline has something cooking.  The first two chapters under "Madeline Series" go with both versions, then it splits up into the two versions.  "Cooking with Madeline" follows the series.

Part 4B is back in the works- Miss Parker needs to have a little fun and Madeline is determined to make sure she does! :)



Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Season 1, Season 2, Season 3, Season 4
Characters: Angelo, Brigitte, Broots, Debbie, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Original Character, Sydney, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11415
Read Count: 10979
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 23/04/10


Title: Chapter 4: Through the Gates of Change (Version 1: Part 6)

Hmmm, let me think about this one .... does it mesh with the other parts?   Well it has my approval!  :) 

Author's Response: Well, I definately value your onion opinion (can you tell I've been working a bit too much lately?!  LOL), so that's good enough for me.  =)

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/02/10
Title: Chapter 3: Laughter is the Best Medicine (Version 1: Part 5)

Yes You had better dedicate this fic to us!  You sent us spoilers before the episode aired and .....  Oh wait!  That was ten years ago so I guess you're forgiven!  :)

Alright so I'm being a bit of a smart ass but I haven't been able to give you a hard time in a very long time   so I'm making up for it!  :)  And i remember what tough beta reader you were for my fics!!!!  (Ha Ha!)  OK, I've read 3 chapters so far so get back to writing, you've been a way too long and have a lot to make up for.  It's good to have you back!



Author's Response:

LOL- I can't believe I got so carried away I forgot everyone was in later time zones!  Well, ok, knowing me I can totally believe it.  =)  I totally cracked up laughing rereading this part.

Be a smart ass all you want, I've missed it.  If you're still writing TP fics, I'd love to be your beta again.  =)

Over the weekend (my weekend is Sun-Mon), I'll watch Toy Surprise again, and start in on the part I want to insert between Chapter 1 and this one.  =)

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/02/10
Bath blaster blasting by Chris
Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Response to the weekly challenge. Create a story using the instructions for the bath blasters.

Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 441
Read Count: 2994
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 11/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Sweet!  And yes I perfer Miss Parker as the woman in the story.  Love it! 

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/05/07