Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Romance
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Word count: 488
Read Count: 2230
The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.
Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.
Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.
LOL! I always loved your stories and it's a delight to read them again. Miss your writing Lady.
This one is so good! Love how true to character it is! A must read!Reviewer: RaChell Signed
So nice to re-read this story! I forgot what a sense of humour and daring could do to take a short story to a new level. I could picture Miss Parker doing something like this.Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Very touching and so sad. Perfect story.
Author's Response: *bows* thanks
Intense and wonderful as usual. So why am I always surprised when I stumble acorss these little hidden jewels of yours scattered thru the website?
>So why am I always surprised when I stumble acorss these little hidden jewels of yours scattered thru the website?
lol, yes, why? ;P
No, really, glad you like it. Currently there's nothing new, because I haven't seen my muse in like... years.
I have some faint ideas, but they just won't get down on paper *sighs*Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Very thought provoking. Interesting comparassion of Jarod and Alex as being at war. Never thought of it like that.
Author's Response: yay me then. glad you liked!
Cute sorty Gena! Your writing is getting better and I like it!
Thanks. I love you RaChell. :)
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How funny! I remember Snowy's lounge. ;) But I never knew about this story. Oh you shameless hussy you. (blush, blush)
Very nice and well done. You write so well that the reader can picture Miss Parker in the cottage and see her deep in thought. Great job!Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Very nicely written. I would say this is sweet without being over done, a well excuted piece of writing.
I have to agree with Jersygirl, they did kiss as children and yes, from their POV I do think it counts. Afterall, the Centre doesn't let one stay a child for long and every bit of something 'special' would be treasured in that hell hole.Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Cute! Very funny!Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Nice going! I had no idea that you had written this. Now when are you going to finish it? A nice romantic ending with the Centre brought crashing to it's knees. Sydney and Broots freed from the tyrant (known as the Centre), free to pursue their own dreams. You really need to write more.
Cute! And so true! Relationships are a always a double edge sword.Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Really liked this story. I was in suspense thru the whole thing and I really liked the way you ended it.Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Great story Chris! Nice to re-read it.Reviewer: RaChell Signed
LOL! This is beyond cute! I love it! Now I'll never look at ice cream the same way again. ;)Reviewer: RaChell Signed
This was always a cute story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I finally got into this. LOL
Wonderful! What a delightful story and you can almost smell the smoke and see Raines' glare. Nicely done.Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Really sad and moving.Reviewer: RaChell Signed
What a twisted ending! I never would have guessed it. Nicely done story and very tense and on the edge of your seat reading. Good Job!BTW I love adding these pictures in the reviews, you've created a monster you know!
LMAO, i have noticed a 'few' pics popping up in the reveiws you leave... hee heee.
Glad to have surprised you with the ending. Felt that just once it would be nice if things went a little differently in a story.
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LMAO! This is too cute and funny. Excuse me while I pick my self up from the floor and straigthen my chair. Way to go!Reviewer: RaChell Signed
A young girl is dumped in front of Miss Parker's house in the middle of winter. How will she affect Parker's life?
2010: Chapter 2 has been updated to include a missing chunk that was cut out in the original transfer here. I'm sorry it took me so long to realize it!
2013: Ch 1&2 have been updated slightly.
I remember being a big fan of this series when you were writing it. Loved the storyline. Good to see it again. :)
Thanks RaChell! It's great to see a familiar face. =) I just watched all 4 seasons and both movies in less than a month and my Pretender obsession is back in full force... working on more Madeline as we speak.Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Version One of the Madeline Series. Madeline has something cooking. The first two chapters under "Madeline Series" go with both versions, then it splits up into the two versions. "Cooking with Madeline" follows the series.
Part 4B is back in the works- Miss Parker needs to have a little fun and Madeline is determined to make sure she does! :)
Hmmm, let me think about this one .... does it mesh with the other parts? Well it has my approval! :)
Author's Response: Well, I definately value your
onion opinion (can you tell I've been working a bit too much lately?! LOL), so that's good enough for me. =)
Yes You had better dedicate this fic to us! You sent us spoilers before the episode aired and ..... Oh wait! That was ten years ago so I guess you're forgiven! :)
Alright so I'm being a bit of a smart ass but I haven't been able to give you a hard time in a very long time so I'm making up for it! :) And i remember what tough beta reader you were for my fics!!!! (Ha Ha!) OK, I've read 3 chapters so far so get back to writing, you've been a way too long and have a lot to make up for. It's good to have you back!
LOL- I can't believe I got so carried away I forgot everyone was in later time zones! Well, ok, knowing me I can totally believe it. =) I totally cracked up laughing rereading this part.
Be a smart ass all you want, I've missed it. If you're still writing TP fics, I'd love to be your beta again. =)
Over the weekend (my weekend is Sun-Mon), I'll watch Toy Surprise again, and start in on the part I want to insert between Chapter 1 and this one. =)Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Sweet! And yes I perfer Miss Parker as the woman in the story. Love it!Reviewer: RaChell Signed